for I want to belong10/3/2010 c65 
4simply.over.edge
Ah! I cant wait till the next chapter. What a cliff hanger. :) I Love your story, I've been following it for a long time. Keep it up! :)
4simply.over.edgeAh! I cant wait till the next chapter. What a cliff hanger. :) I Love your story, I've been following it for a long time. Keep it up! :)
10/3/2010 c1 BludyNothing
You know: I began reading this story this morning from chapter 1 to 65 all day! It took me around 8 hours to finish, plus some things distracted me - stopping me from reading. Like eating and doing laundry and nature's calls.
This story blew me away. And for some sick reason, I compared this fiction with Twilight. The fact that Devon is just so handsome reminded me of Edward's sparkly skin.. Ugh. I like Devon though!
You know: I began reading this story this morning from chapter 1 to 65 all day! It took me around 8 hours to finish, plus some things distracted me - stopping me from reading. Like eating and doing laundry and nature's calls.
This story blew me away. And for some sick reason, I compared this fiction with Twilight. The fact that Devon is just so handsome reminded me of Edward's sparkly skin.. Ugh. I like Devon though!
10/3/2010 c65 BludyNothing
Haha! Wow. By now, Devon seems like an obsessive stalker. I wonder what's going to happen next! I hope you update soon, ok? :)
This is going to be difficult for Devon. I feel bad for the guy and Anna's kind of crazy. Hehe.
Oh, I'm just wondering: Will you be considering this exact entire story viewed by Devon?
I'm sure you'll say no, but it's just that Anna makes those stereotypical assumptions about a lot of people in the Weston household and it's a little hard to really understand someone's point of view when they are dense and confused almost all the time!
Haha! Wow. By now, Devon seems like an obsessive stalker. I wonder what's going to happen next! I hope you update soon, ok? :)
This is going to be difficult for Devon. I feel bad for the guy and Anna's kind of crazy. Hehe.
Oh, I'm just wondering: Will you be considering this exact entire story viewed by Devon?
I'm sure you'll say no, but it's just that Anna makes those stereotypical assumptions about a lot of people in the Weston household and it's a little hard to really understand someone's point of view when they are dense and confused almost all the time!
10/3/2010 c65 1Tilly of Silly
YAY! Update! I"M OVER ENTHUSIASTIC CAN YOU TELL! Stupid Anna. Micheal would be crushed, he already gave Devon permission to marry her. I have a feeling that if Devon can't convince her in the time he has, he'll just make more. And if that still doesn't work, I have a strong feeling that the kids will do the rest. *chanting under her breath* lock them in a broom closer, lock them in a broom closet. I don't know sems the right thing to do. If you know life was a comedy. But it is my friend it's a comedy of erorrs! Hah! I make myself laugh...that's so sad. It's my firm belief that it is never too late to respond to reviews. So I expect one in two months time, ya hear! And I expect an update before then...or else. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (when has it ever not been fun to type MWHAHAHAHAHA, I'm grinning just typing it.) It's another great chapter RMB4 (How do you pronounce that anyway do you just say r m b 4? I usually pronounce it rumba...yeah.) I can't for the next and the next and the next. Because your running out of plot...hopefully. If Anna does something stupid again which extends it for another twelve chapters (no matter how much I love reading this story) I will punch her pretty little denying face in. My optimistic side is voilent beware ( does that make sense? I can answer that myself no it doesn't unless you've read one of my reviews from a different username then no it doesn't.) May the writer god be with you!
-Tilly
1Tilly of SillyYAY! Update! I"M OVER ENTHUSIASTIC CAN YOU TELL! Stupid Anna. Micheal would be crushed, he already gave Devon permission to marry her. I have a feeling that if Devon can't convince her in the time he has, he'll just make more. And if that still doesn't work, I have a strong feeling that the kids will do the rest. *chanting under her breath* lock them in a broom closer, lock them in a broom closet. I don't know sems the right thing to do. If you know life was a comedy. But it is my friend it's a comedy of erorrs! Hah! I make myself laugh...that's so sad. It's my firm belief that it is never too late to respond to reviews. So I expect one in two months time, ya hear! And I expect an update before then...or else. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (when has it ever not been fun to type MWHAHAHAHAHA, I'm grinning just typing it.) It's another great chapter RMB4 (How do you pronounce that anyway do you just say r m b 4? I usually pronounce it rumba...yeah.) I can't for the next and the next and the next. Because your running out of plot...hopefully. If Anna does something stupid again which extends it for another twelve chapters (no matter how much I love reading this story) I will punch her pretty little denying face in. My optimistic side is voilent beware ( does that make sense? I can answer that myself no it doesn't unless you've read one of my reviews from a different username then no it doesn't.) May the writer god be with you!
-Tilly
10/3/2010 c65 2Its.Not.Me.Its.You
I love the chapter!
I think it would have been wrong for her to just go for it straight off the bat.
I was just thinking about how much I missed your updates when I was checking my mail and found this.
PLEASE update soon!
Have a good day!
-Ifly*hugs*
2Its.Not.Me.Its.YouI love the chapter!
I think it would have been wrong for her to just go for it straight off the bat.
I was just thinking about how much I missed your updates when I was checking my mail and found this.
PLEASE update soon!
Have a good day!
-Ifly*hugs*
10/3/2010 c65 5TheLadySongSerenade
Anna really is a coward. I mean, I'm not saying I'm much better- I wouldn't even ask a guy to dance even tho I promised my friend I would (cuz he looked lonely) but still... I don't know. There's this short story we had to read in my English class- It's called Before the Law- or something... IDK
5TheLadySongSerenadeAnna really is a coward. I mean, I'm not saying I'm much better- I wouldn't even ask a guy to dance even tho I promised my friend I would (cuz he looked lonely) but still... I don't know. There's this short story we had to read in my English class- It's called Before the Law- or something... IDK
10/3/2010 c65 YumGirlandMoltMan
This is a nice story, it really is, and I don't mean offense but all of this could have happened in MUCH less then 65 chapters.
If you are going for quantity you have hit the jackpot, I will say that, but it is the quality of writing that makes a story, not the quantity.
This is a nice story, it really is, and I don't mean offense but all of this could have happened in MUCH less then 65 chapters.
If you are going for quantity you have hit the jackpot, I will say that, but it is the quality of writing that makes a story, not the quantity.
9/22/2010 c64 annoynumus
wow i read this story over and over again 5 times and i hope you update as SOON as you get back. Please and thank you of course. heeh loved this chapter
wow i read this story over and over again 5 times and i hope you update as SOON as you get back. Please and thank you of course. heeh loved this chapter
9/20/2010 c64 Manic-Cheese-Fairy
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! I couldn't believe that! That's so cute, Anna and Devon - you should write about the wedding! Love it! Update soon!
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! I couldn't believe that! That's so cute, Anna and Devon - you should write about the wedding! Love it! Update soon!
9/19/2010 c64 TheLadySongSerenade
well, I wouldn't exactly say you're rushing it because it did take you an awful long time to get to this point =) however, I think it's good. I also think some of the dialogue is a bit stilted and awkward, but most of it is good. Bravo- write more!
well, I wouldn't exactly say you're rushing it because it did take you an awful long time to get to this point =) however, I think it's good. I also think some of the dialogue is a bit stilted and awkward, but most of it is good. Bravo- write more!
9/16/2010 c64 Tina
aww 3 weeks ? lol i just started reading your story yesterday and finished it in less then a day, its gonna be a long 3 weeks. I think u kinda did rush it with the proposal but still sweet im gonna hate wen this story comes to a close i can already tell. I think maybe bc there was such a long wait the chapter came out that way but it was still great so no worries looking forward to a new chapter and thanks for sharing with us :)
please let me know wen u update if its not too much trouble
aww 3 weeks ? lol i just started reading your story yesterday and finished it in less then a day, its gonna be a long 3 weeks. I think u kinda did rush it with the proposal but still sweet im gonna hate wen this story comes to a close i can already tell. I think maybe bc there was such a long wait the chapter came out that way but it was still great so no worries looking forward to a new chapter and thanks for sharing with us :)
please let me know wen u update if its not too much trouble
9/13/2010 c64 someone
i actually read this chap when it was first updated but couldn't reveiw cuz i was busy so sorry it was late. its awesome and i cant wait for the next one
i actually read this chap when it was first updated but couldn't reveiw cuz i was busy so sorry it was late. its awesome and i cant wait for the next one