for I want to belong6/29/2013 c68 zaini
i loved it! i can't tell u, u've done a great job by writting this beautiful story for us i'll always remember it! love u for writting this! and FYI i'm 14 year old! and i love the idea of the story as well! and i love Devon as well he is in my imagination...but still...! u know.! :D :D
And there was many spelling and gramatical mistakes in this story but they were acceptable! :D
i loved it! i can't tell u, u've done a great job by writting this beautiful story for us i'll always remember it! love u for writting this! and FYI i'm 14 year old! and i love the idea of the story as well! and i love Devon as well he is in my imagination...but still...! u know.! :D :D
And there was many spelling and gramatical mistakes in this story but they were acceptable! :D
1/21/2013 c68 ClosetReader
This was a really sweet story! Loved the characters! They really endeared themselves to me!
This was a really sweet story! Loved the characters! They really endeared themselves to me!
1/20/2013 c19 ClosetReader
Really enjoying the story and can't wait for the day when Devon has to take all his words back.
Really enjoying the story and can't wait for the day when Devon has to take all his words back.
12/22/2012 c67 LOVEtoREAD22
Funny, I kinda expected for her boyfriend to be Tom using a surname or something or her boyfriend actually was some guy named Brian that worked for the newspaper or had something to settle against Devon
Funny, I kinda expected for her boyfriend to be Tom using a surname or something or her boyfriend actually was some guy named Brian that worked for the newspaper or had something to settle against Devon
12/21/2012 c22 LOVEtoREAD22
Okay so I know I'm like a year or two to late, but I want to suggest something. When you make the characters talk you don't use contractions.
"I am not sure I will have the time"
That is an example. No one talks like that.
It would sound better if it wasn't like that.
"I'm not sure. I'll have time"
That would sound much better and would be easier.
Over all, great job!
Okay so I know I'm like a year or two to late, but I want to suggest something. When you make the characters talk you don't use contractions.
"I am not sure I will have the time"
That is an example. No one talks like that.
It would sound better if it wasn't like that.
"I'm not sure. I'll have time"
That would sound much better and would be easier.
Over all, great job!
9/29/2012 c68 Sky Pirates
I've read this story years ago as a guest, and now that I've created and account, I just want to drop by a review. I had to admit that the first thing that attracted me to this fic was that the name of the main character was Anna - which is also my name. Weird reason, I know, but then I got so drawn to the story! I love it! It has all those quirky plots, and the characters are all awesome. XD
I've read this story years ago as a guest, and now that I've created and account, I just want to drop by a review. I had to admit that the first thing that attracted me to this fic was that the name of the main character was Anna - which is also my name. Weird reason, I know, but then I got so drawn to the story! I love it! It has all those quirky plots, and the characters are all awesome. XD
8/15/2012 c69 AnonymousReads
I loved his story some would say it is cliche but i disagree it was so fun to to read and longer than most. I think that the whole marriage thing was rushed because they werent even really dating and all of a sudden they are getting married, loves never that fast. I love annas kids and well all of the kids and dogs, i want to kill tom, and the adults are okay i like june but i also like annas smartness and how everyone tries to help her. I think that if you were to do a sequel it should be about grown up cristy or mike or maybe even lizzy. Good story. :)
I loved his story some would say it is cliche but i disagree it was so fun to to read and longer than most. I think that the whole marriage thing was rushed because they werent even really dating and all of a sudden they are getting married, loves never that fast. I love annas kids and well all of the kids and dogs, i want to kill tom, and the adults are okay i like june but i also like annas smartness and how everyone tries to help her. I think that if you were to do a sequel it should be about grown up cristy or mike or maybe even lizzy. Good story. :)
7/31/2012 c68 Rose George
This book was great! It really was a breath of fresh air compared to all the other romance books I've been reading! I love the whole idea of Devon being incredibly mean to Anna in the beginning! I really want to read a book where the guy and girl are equally bad to each other at the start though! Could you pleaaase write one or suggest me one?
Absolutely amazing work and don't worry, It wasn't such a cliche lol
This book was great! It really was a breath of fresh air compared to all the other romance books I've been reading! I love the whole idea of Devon being incredibly mean to Anna in the beginning! I really want to read a book where the guy and girl are equally bad to each other at the start though! Could you pleaaase write one or suggest me one?
Absolutely amazing work and don't worry, It wasn't such a cliche lol
7/15/2012 c67 DA-chen1
Yeah, Amanda was sweet... brave of her to visit them and tell them the truth! ;-)
Mira
Yeah, Amanda was sweet... brave of her to visit them and tell them the truth! ;-)
Mira