for I want to belong2/15/2010 c5 Deeps
The story is very good. And I hope your schedule doesn't keep you from continuing!. Please update the next chapter soon. I can't wait to read it.
The story is very good. And I hope your schedule doesn't keep you from continuing!. Please update the next chapter soon. I can't wait to read it.
2/15/2010 c5 
10jeepers09
This story is very good so far. Makes me want to read more and more. I hope your schedule doesn't keep you from continuing!
10jeepers09This story is very good so far. Makes me want to read more and more. I hope your schedule doesn't keep you from continuing!
2/12/2010 c3 2MiscellaneousMe
Hmm your plot seems interesting so far. I'm curious to see where this is headed.
2MiscellaneousMeHmm your plot seems interesting so far. I'm curious to see where this is headed.
2/12/2010 c3 BRMR
I'm really interested to see where you go with this!
...But I'd like to make a suggestion if I may. I noticed that you wrote 'felled' alot, and while it is a word, you're using it in the wrong context. In the sense that your writing, I think you meant to write 'felt' not 'felled'. It's just a suggestion but it really takes away from your writing when you have mispelled words. I hope you don't take my constructive critiscism the wrong way. :)
I'm really interested to see where you go with this!
...But I'd like to make a suggestion if I may. I noticed that you wrote 'felled' alot, and while it is a word, you're using it in the wrong context. In the sense that your writing, I think you meant to write 'felt' not 'felled'. It's just a suggestion but it really takes away from your writing when you have mispelled words. I hope you don't take my constructive critiscism the wrong way. :)