
9/11/2011 c7
1CrazyCinderellaGirl
You are such an amazing writer! All i can say is...MORE, MORE, MORE!...Please ;)

You are such an amazing writer! All i can say is...MORE, MORE, MORE!...Please ;)
3/31/2011 c7 Alixermixer
I just read the first one and I have to say that I am glad that you continued the story. Even though it looks like she won't be, I hope Melanie isn't a problem for the happy couple but you know her brother isn't gonna let that happen.
I just read the first one and I have to say that I am glad that you continued the story. Even though it looks like she won't be, I hope Melanie isn't a problem for the happy couple but you know her brother isn't gonna let that happen.
2/17/2010 c3 fallenxalive
OMG
is melanie the girl derek was helping?
actually dont answer that cause i want to find out myself...or do i?yeah i do
anyway i love this story so far,but i know that it wont run so smoothly in the story,there has to be some drama,but i hope i wont cry.
cant wait for the next chapter.
actually compring to my other stories on alert you updated first,the ither ones didnt update for months now.
WOW that is a long review,but i like to ramble lol
OMG
is melanie the girl derek was helping?
actually dont answer that cause i want to find out myself...or do i?yeah i do
anyway i love this story so far,but i know that it wont run so smoothly in the story,there has to be some drama,but i hope i wont cry.
cant wait for the next chapter.
actually compring to my other stories on alert you updated first,the ither ones didnt update for months now.
WOW that is a long review,but i like to ramble lol
2/16/2010 c3 Person 202
Let the drama begin...
Let the drama begin...
2/12/2010 c2 fallenxalive
sorry for my last review
it was a lil tiny bit short
but you know,i got over exited and stuff.
this is sounding like a great double romance so far
cant wait for the next chapter
oh and thank you for replying to my review,thats a first
sorry for my last review
it was a lil tiny bit short
but you know,i got over exited and stuff.
this is sounding like a great double romance so far
cant wait for the next chapter
oh and thank you for replying to my review,thats a first
2/12/2010 c1 fallenxalive
I gasped and sat up, “Oh my god! For real?”
He nodded, “For real.”
FOR REAL!
I gasped and sat up, “Oh my god! For real?”
He nodded, “For real.”
FOR REAL!
2/11/2010 c1 Person 202
I really like it so far .
Good start .
Can't wait to read more .
Take your time .
Good job
&
Good luck
I really like it so far .
Good start .
Can't wait to read more .
Take your time .
Good job
&
Good luck