
10/7/2010 c1
18Brat Harvis
wow very humurous... I like the Cell phone texts... Poor students not knowing what to do.. I also like the innocense the girl has to tell the teacher the truth, very nice connection, sad ending but very funny... nice post

wow very humurous... I like the Cell phone texts... Poor students not knowing what to do.. I also like the innocense the girl has to tell the teacher the truth, very nice connection, sad ending but very funny... nice post
7/14/2010 c1
1Bamara
Ha! I read this story because of the title! Very clever. Nice story by the way. I liked the fact that you told the story in a different format, and the different povs.

Ha! I read this story because of the title! Very clever. Nice story by the way. I liked the fact that you told the story in a different format, and the different povs.
4/8/2010 c1
12Crazywritings
OH. MY. GOD. THAT'S SO F.UCKING GOOD. I LOVE YOU.
I really like the notes thing. Like the emails. It's a good idea, nice, nice!
The only thing I'm thinking about is the "follow her cause she's a slut" thing. Not to be mean, but I just don't see that happening. It's just kind of random.
Also, I HATE you for making someone find out! WHY? They were painfully adorable!
But it's very good. Well done!
PS. When he said "I must've gained 10 pounds!" I looked down at the pudding I was eating and reconsidered my choice in snackage...
I ate it anyway...

OH. MY. GOD. THAT'S SO F.UCKING GOOD. I LOVE YOU.
I really like the notes thing. Like the emails. It's a good idea, nice, nice!
The only thing I'm thinking about is the "follow her cause she's a slut" thing. Not to be mean, but I just don't see that happening. It's just kind of random.
Also, I HATE you for making someone find out! WHY? They were painfully adorable!
But it's very good. Well done!
PS. When he said "I must've gained 10 pounds!" I looked down at the pudding I was eating and reconsidered my choice in snackage...
I ate it anyway...
2/13/2010 c1
10fanta-esque
I really didn't think much of the emailing and I didn't like the text messages at all but oh my god the story is brilliant lol! I hope you'll continue this although as a one shot it is just awesome!

I really didn't think much of the emailing and I didn't like the text messages at all but oh my god the story is brilliant lol! I hope you'll continue this although as a one shot it is just awesome!
2/13/2010 c1 kodkvnnrjgn
I'm not sure what you were going for, but I found this very humorous. :) It was also realistic in that students always gossip and rumors spread like wildfire. This was very entertaining!
I'm not sure what you were going for, but I found this very humorous. :) It was also realistic in that students always gossip and rumors spread like wildfire. This was very entertaining!