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11/12/2010 c1 Vulcan Rider
Excellent writing. Nice flow. Great characterization.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Mag
9/27/2010 c1 kells
This is adorable :D

I love how you've let them develop their relationship instead of jumping straight into the whole 'i fell in love with you' thing, if that makes sense. xD It flows naturally.
8/25/2010 c1 Hearts of Solitude
Aw... this is so sweet... Made me so happy! :D
7/17/2010 c1 3lost in pale blue
I love how their relationship develops. It's too bad that Jayden has to be related to that ass.
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5/4/2010 c1 1x Farii
I like this :DD

Though if you had included the reason why Jayden decided not to go to college it might have been better.

But hey, that's just me(:
4/15/2010 c1 tamii
Cute :) I didn't really like her at the beginning when she was acting really snobbish but she changed for the better. I'm glad she went for the better brother! (now, she can rub it in Jasper's face!)

I really liked this story - really cute and interesting story line. I have to admit I did think it was another cliche - girl falls for boyfriend's brother etc, but you made it very original and she didn't even like him at the beginning! It was really funny when she got jealous!

I'm glad it was a happy ending though - I'm a sucker for those :)
3/25/2010 c1 AdiGal
That was wonderful.

:)
3/22/2010 c1 12theyStoleMyPenName
very well done! sweet and cute and actually believable.

well, except for jasper. seriously, leaving girls in the middle of the road in the middle of the night? asswipe much:))

- che
3/17/2010 c1 1funnechick
Really great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it! :)
3/10/2010 c1 sandcastlesinthesand
AW!

that was really cute and amazing!
3/7/2010 c1 2Smurph92
AMAZING!

Write like this all the time

I'm going to tell everyone i know about this

Time for myspace!
2/21/2010 c1 3Katie Valentine
Awhh, swet. (:

Okay I need to sleep now. Lol, almost 4 a.m and I have a test I have to study for when I wake.. ugh..

Write more one-shots! =D
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