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2/21/2010 c1 14Sapphyre Nymph
so swet!
2/19/2010 c1 5greensmiles
I LOVEED THIS ONE-SHOT. I like the original idea behind it, good job:D
2/17/2010 c1 6ithinkyourgay
aw

how cute is this story

love it
2/17/2010 c1 SnoQueen
Oh...my...gosh...

THIS WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY! I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT!

Yeah...it was a little quick...I got a bit confused at the part where she was suddenly at his work because I think there was something missing in the middle...but I loved it anyway...

Other than that though...written REALLY well...really, really good!

Keep it up!

~ SnoQueen
2/17/2010 c1 SparklingStar25
That was really great!
2/16/2010 c1 Yellow.Jellow
Very cute! If you had made any errors, I certainly didn't notice them. Usually, I do if the story doesn't hold my full attention but since I couldn't stop reading, I was too distracted to notice anything else. Great job!
2/16/2010 c1 4anitsirK
aw... I'm such a hopeless romantic. That just brought tears into my eyes. Hahahaha.
2/16/2010 c1 1TumbleWeed23
that was cool! I liked that a lot! :D I love Jayden! :)
2/16/2010 c1 ghurl00
Aw.. That was cute! Really cute!♥ Well done!
2/16/2010 c1 9milenaa
Hey there! I found this on the comm For the love of One Shots. Did you reference Jerry Maguire in your summary? Haha, I like that movie!

The story was very enjoyable and easy to read. Although the story seems to happen in only a few days, it is believable, although I'd work on giving more "bonding" time to Jayden and Amy.

Jasper is a grand douchebag, excuse my language. I can't help but wonder what goes on in his mind to do this to girls!
2/16/2010 c1 10balloonfista
aw.

LOVE IT!

so cute.

Ri
2/15/2010 c1 coolpieces
great story! but Amy pissed me off. dunno, but characters/people like her really get on my nerves. she was just so extra. but whatever, Jayden was cool. Jasper was just... disgusting. i would slap him if i knew him. wtf was wrong with him. haha, sorry, i'm just ranting because i really don't want to get back to my biology. last thing i want to do right now.

anyway, yes. lovely story line. keep it up.
2/15/2010 c1 18found.eventually
Aww I like Jayden. Somehow all the characters in stories I've read that has the name Jayden are all really... attractive to me. Loved this story, good plot, nice lines, clear setting. Nicely done, darl. :)
2/15/2010 c1 3BethyT
This was, to put it simply, fantastic. I liked the characters, and they were believable. The only thing I have to say is some of the dialog was a little bit stiff, like the the emotion wasn't quite there. But that happens to everyone some time.

I really enjoyed it!
2/15/2010 c1 24Ravina
I love it! It was so sweet and light-hearted...

- Rebekah
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