for doll2/16/2010 c1 
23thinking.about.thinking
This is amazing. I love how you show the progression of the way the speaker views the toy (or, perhaps, a person) as time passes on. This is definitely going on my favorites.
thinking.about.thinking
23thinking.about.thinkingThis is amazing. I love how you show the progression of the way the speaker views the toy (or, perhaps, a person) as time passes on. This is definitely going on my favorites.
thinking.about.thinking
2/16/2010 c1 Isca
"Your eyes fall out." Woah. What a striking image. The tone of this line is so chilling and impactful.
"Your eyes fall out." Woah. What a striking image. The tone of this line is so chilling and impactful.