for you are leaving2/16/2010 c1 Isca
"My quiet eyes." I love your use of the word "quiet" here; it's perfect.
"I think that I should save you from this place." I like the angsty tone of this line; it's like the speaker knows that she cannot save this other person, even though she knows she should.
"My quiet eyes." I love your use of the word "quiet" here; it's perfect.
"I think that I should save you from this place." I like the angsty tone of this line; it's like the speaker knows that she cannot save this other person, even though she knows she should.
2/16/2010 c1 
23thinking.about.thinking
Another absolutely beautiful poem. I love the last stanza.
thinking.about.thinking
23thinking.about.thinkingAnother absolutely beautiful poem. I love the last stanza.
thinking.about.thinking