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3I'll Break Your Heart
I read this so many years ago and I have to say it’s still fantastic! I don’t know if I’ll ever be able to thank writers like you for working so diligently and putting yourself out here in this way. This is a great story. I hope you keep writing. You’re awesome!
3I'll Break Your HeartI read this so many years ago and I have to say it’s still fantastic! I don’t know if I’ll ever be able to thank writers like you for working so diligently and putting yourself out here in this way. This is a great story. I hope you keep writing. You’re awesome!
11/6/2016 c2 Guest
God dammit. It's two in the morning and you've already got me crying profusely to the point of developing a mild head ache. I don't know how much more of this I can handle.
Mad props, my friend.
God dammit. It's two in the morning and you've already got me crying profusely to the point of developing a mild head ache. I don't know how much more of this I can handle.
Mad props, my friend.
4/6/2014 c1 mimster259
I just finished reading the book, bought it a little while ago and just got around to finishing it. Can I just say that you're like my favorite author now. Like no joke, that was one of the most heart-tugging books I've just read. Somehow you tapped into the mindset of what Lucas would be thinking and going through and it's just incredible. Absolutely brilliant. If I'm being honest I cried more times than I'll amount to. Just...I really enjoyed it and I'll miss Lucas and Sawyer.
I just finished reading the book, bought it a little while ago and just got around to finishing it. Can I just say that you're like my favorite author now. Like no joke, that was one of the most heart-tugging books I've just read. Somehow you tapped into the mindset of what Lucas would be thinking and going through and it's just incredible. Absolutely brilliant. If I'm being honest I cried more times than I'll amount to. Just...I really enjoyed it and I'll miss Lucas and Sawyer.
7/23/2012 c6 Guest
I love this story, but right now I can't get over how upset I am that no one checked Luc for a concussion...
I love this story, but right now I can't get over how upset I am that no one checked Luc for a concussion...
12/16/2011 c26 x3bbyshortie
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY WILL BUY VERY SOON! It makes you really think about what you have and viewpoints you have on other people! LOVE IT, your a great writer!
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY WILL BUY VERY SOON! It makes you really think about what you have and viewpoints you have on other people! LOVE IT, your a great writer!
11/25/2011 c25 10BeeSkeez
Absolutely beautiful. I don't know how else to describe how I feel about this story. Like, jarringly beautiful and emotional and a joy to read.
Everything about it was just perfectly done and it had this real yet surreal quality which just made it more beautiful. Honestly, stories like this one are the reason I write; because I'm deseperate to be able to write something like this one day. Thank you so much for sharing that story and being as talented as you are to be able to write that.
Bee
10BeeSkeezAbsolutely beautiful. I don't know how else to describe how I feel about this story. Like, jarringly beautiful and emotional and a joy to read.
Everything about it was just perfectly done and it had this real yet surreal quality which just made it more beautiful. Honestly, stories like this one are the reason I write; because I'm deseperate to be able to write something like this one day. Thank you so much for sharing that story and being as talented as you are to be able to write that.
Bee
11/24/2011 c26 anjali
i'm emotionally attached to this book. it has made me cry soo many times :D
i'm emotionally attached to this book. it has made me cry soo many times :D
11/13/2011 c1 Raina Rasberry
got to know u through charlief BTW, im into supernatural tht doesnt involve vamps if u want to know!
i havent even finished the first chapter, and im already lovin u! god, thsi guy, i dont even know his name yet, has got my heart melting! im only fourteen but i hope tht if i ever get a boy, i wish he would be as sweet to me as this guy is! its beautiful, jsut a few words explain how much he loves his mom and he doesnt even say stuff like 'i love her a lot' or smting, its just so beautifully explained in words tht its not even needed!
im going to read this stry COMPLETELY! ill even pull some all nighters in between
i dont know weder u still read ur mail on the reviews but i just want u to know tht ive found my new black and white love, Collision Cource!
i may not review to every single chapter, but ill be sure to leave a rveiew @ the end and also in between if i find a need to voice out my thoughts! ull find me on fanfiction.net under the same name as i have reviewed if u want to know :D
got to know u through charlief BTW, im into supernatural tht doesnt involve vamps if u want to know!
i havent even finished the first chapter, and im already lovin u! god, thsi guy, i dont even know his name yet, has got my heart melting! im only fourteen but i hope tht if i ever get a boy, i wish he would be as sweet to me as this guy is! its beautiful, jsut a few words explain how much he loves his mom and he doesnt even say stuff like 'i love her a lot' or smting, its just so beautifully explained in words tht its not even needed!
im going to read this stry COMPLETELY! ill even pull some all nighters in between
i dont know weder u still read ur mail on the reviews but i just want u to know tht ive found my new black and white love, Collision Cource!
i may not review to every single chapter, but ill be sure to leave a rveiew @ the end and also in between if i find a need to voice out my thoughts! ull find me on fanfiction.net under the same name as i have reviewed if u want to know :D
11/10/2011 c9 tara
Okay, my prediction was that Lucas would become an alcoholic because of everyone around him believing that was how his friends died and that he's just a screw-up. But somehow, I doubt that's where this story is heading. I think that might have been more interesting, but it's also a bit predictable, so...I'll see what you have in store, I guess. :P
I'm not a big fan of Sawyer's character. Honestly, she seems a bit dull so far. Something about her just doesn't click with me. Funny thing is, my favorite character so far is a dead one - Darren. You did a great job of depicting him even if his appearances are brief. He feels real. I hope there's more insight into Josh's character, too.
And I'm wondering if Lucas will ever realize he had a concussion, lol.
Anyway, I haven't experienced a trauma like this before, so I don't know if you're depicting the recovery process accurately, but it doesn't seem terribly off, at least. It does seem odd that the vast majority of his school seems to be totally against him, though. I mean, come on...Guess he's lucky that Sawyer transferred there or else he'd really be screwed. Speaking of which, I'm interested in her back story as well.
Okay, my prediction was that Lucas would become an alcoholic because of everyone around him believing that was how his friends died and that he's just a screw-up. But somehow, I doubt that's where this story is heading. I think that might have been more interesting, but it's also a bit predictable, so...I'll see what you have in store, I guess. :P
I'm not a big fan of Sawyer's character. Honestly, she seems a bit dull so far. Something about her just doesn't click with me. Funny thing is, my favorite character so far is a dead one - Darren. You did a great job of depicting him even if his appearances are brief. He feels real. I hope there's more insight into Josh's character, too.
And I'm wondering if Lucas will ever realize he had a concussion, lol.
Anyway, I haven't experienced a trauma like this before, so I don't know if you're depicting the recovery process accurately, but it doesn't seem terribly off, at least. It does seem odd that the vast majority of his school seems to be totally against him, though. I mean, come on...Guess he's lucky that Sawyer transferred there or else he'd really be screwed. Speaking of which, I'm interested in her back story as well.
10/17/2011 c25 8Francine Brown
This is so wonderfully written. This would seriously make the saddest movie ever :'( I love this story! Up all night reading the whole thing. You are an amazing writer :)
8Francine BrownThis is so wonderfully written. This would seriously make the saddest movie ever :'( I love this story! Up all night reading the whole thing. You are an amazing writer :)