for If Only10/16/2010 c1 
5CuriousContradiction
Hey! A bit of constructive criticism: show more, tell less. I know that piece of advice is overused, but a little reminding never hurts. I liked the repetition and the connection of the music and the war. :)
5CuriousContradictionHey! A bit of constructive criticism: show more, tell less. I know that piece of advice is overused, but a little reminding never hurts. I liked the repetition and the connection of the music and the war. :)
2/19/2010 c1 Naa-Chan
-wipes tear- MAGNIFICENT. :D
-wipes tear- MAGNIFICENT. :D