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1/27/2014 c1 Lks
I like the format of this story, and it's quite sweet, but in my opinion the ending is a bit far-fetched.
(Spoiler alert)
If they kiss under the mistletoe at Christmas, why would he start ignoring her? And then, when she asks if they're friends and he says no, but he totally has time to expand on that, AND she walked (not ran) away so he had still more time to expand on it. And whyever would he feel he needs to make her jealous?
It's just hthat he literally had her at Christmas and then started making things hard for no reason
11/25/2013 c1 daisukiklove
8/16/2012 c1 twibbit
Aww so cute
7/5/2011 c1 2CityBlackOut
cute as blueberry pie, and i LOVE blueberry pie x3
5/9/2011 c1 TeddyBearHugs
This is one of the best stories on this site :D I absolutely love it!
4/19/2011 c1 lalaboom
So cute and sweet! It was a cliche but the way Maddie talked to God made it unique. Nicely done! :)
8/23/2010 c1 siluetamorfa
I really, really like it. It was beautiful even though I think Willy took his time to confess but hey, they're teenagers and a teenage guy in top of that. Love it!
8/20/2010 c1 SecretAgent99
Aw, I thought this was a really sweet oneshot. I liked how it was set in the format of the characters writing letters to God. Haha, that reminds me of the Letters to God movie. :D
8/15/2010 c1 the cup of tea
really really nice :)
8/15/2010 c1 ghurl00
It's hilarious. I love it.:)
8/13/2010 c1 critic

your story was cute! but...will kind of bothered me in the end. you should have explained WHY he was ignoring her for so long. and that's super immature of him to make her jealous after he's been ignoring her.
8/11/2010 c1 WishBlade
Whoa, that was so freakin' adorable!
8/9/2010 c1 Ngoc1231
I do like how you wrote it. It was very different and cute!

Love the story!

8/9/2010 c1 7mesweetescape
aw that was so cute. Pulled at my heartstrings! or whatever that was o.o

Loved it x
8/8/2010 c1 4anitsirK
I love it! Though, were the grammar errors in the first few entries intentional? :) AND, I love Willy. Though his name is pretty dorky. HAHAHHAAHHA! I like its lightheartedness. :)
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