for My Meaningless Existence at a Frozen Yogurt Shop2/24/2018 c1 Otakuami
Fuck that last line totally made my heart stop. That was the perfect and the most brilliant ending I have ever seen.
Fuck that last line totally made my heart stop. That was the perfect and the most brilliant ending I have ever seen.
3/16/2015 c1 chocovic-chu
Hehe, before the MC stated she was a good girl, half a story I considered the MC a cute boy . . . Stupid me. But, it's hilarious! I love Melvin's consideration!
Thanks for sharing and I will be careful to check the summary first if it has no SLASH label on it. XB
Hehe, before the MC stated she was a good girl, half a story I considered the MC a cute boy . . . Stupid me. But, it's hilarious! I love Melvin's consideration!
Thanks for sharing and I will be careful to check the summary first if it has no SLASH label on it. XB
10/10/2014 c1 Andrea
I love this its so cute :((
I love this its so cute :((
5/7/2014 c1 
9JoleneMarselis
Hahahahha, fantastic! That would be so me, and the way you tell it is just great! I wish there was more but that is more a "Oh gosh, what happens next!" because you left it at the perfect open ending. 10 outta 10!
9JoleneMarselisHahahahha, fantastic! That would be so me, and the way you tell it is just great! I wish there was more but that is more a "Oh gosh, what happens next!" because you left it at the perfect open ending. 10 outta 10!
3/18/2014 c1 ughwhy
Wow.
The story has witty dialogues, lovable characters and a clean, simple plot. What more could anyone ask for? The ending is particularly brilliant. You expect it to drag on forever with the girl stuttering and going red in the face but there it ends with a BAM, and you're left with a wide smile on your face.
Lovely. Really amazing.
Wow.
The story has witty dialogues, lovable characters and a clean, simple plot. What more could anyone ask for? The ending is particularly brilliant. You expect it to drag on forever with the girl stuttering and going red in the face but there it ends with a BAM, and you're left with a wide smile on your face.
Lovely. Really amazing.
2/10/2014 c1 Guest
Ridiculously cute, thank you for the lovely read!
Ridiculously cute, thank you for the lovely read!
1/26/2014 c1 3summersun541
Gah, that was hilarious! And though I wish there were a little more, at the same time it's the perfect ending. Great job :)
3summersun541Gah, that was hilarious! And though I wish there were a little more, at the same time it's the perfect ending. Great job :)
12/17/2013 c1 22The Gone Angel
LOL. I just died now. It was sooo cute! I liked all the characters. (Actually, I always like your characters. :P)
Cheers,
Gone
22The Gone AngelLOL. I just died now. It was sooo cute! I liked all the characters. (Actually, I always like your characters. :P)
Cheers,
Gone
11/30/2013 c1 74AlysonSerenaStone
This story was very amusing to me! Your dialogue and comments were so funny, I don't know why, maybe I'm the type of person who is easily amused. Great work!
74AlysonSerenaStoneThis story was very amusing to me! Your dialogue and comments were so funny, I don't know why, maybe I'm the type of person who is easily amused. Great work!
11/11/2013 c1 Ilovedit
Ohh my gosh
:o this was so good!
Arrgh dat ending though C;
Ohh my gosh
:o this was so good!
Arrgh dat ending though C;
9/10/2013 c1 Welp
I've probably read this 6 or 7 times since finding it way back when. I just want to say that it's still one of my favorite stories on this site. The characters are so relatable and the writing is peeeerfect.
Thank you for writing something so awesome. :D
I've probably read this 6 or 7 times since finding it way back when. I just want to say that it's still one of my favorite stories on this site. The characters are so relatable and the writing is peeeerfect.
Thank you for writing something so awesome. :D