2/28/2010 c1 1Mintiee
Review repay :)

That was...slightly disturbing.XD. How did you come up with that idea? Anyway, well done for making the guy in this the most deranged person in the world. I was a bit confused in the beginning, because i didn't know what was meant by the pieces of paper and white clothes. I thought the guy in question was in prison, then when he killed that guy and took his heart, i realised that he was a mental patient in an asylum. It was kind of obvious by that point. :)

But anyway, really well written, and funny in a weird, twisted way. It was kind of hard to understand in the beginning, but thats to be expected if it's written in first person and the guy's insane, so i dont really think you can improve on it. So nice work!

The end also confused me. Did clarice sedate him? coz that's what it seemed like. If so, Good effect.

And one more thing, this has gotta be inspired by silence of the lambs. Right? It's just her name is clarice, and he reminded me so much of hannibal lector...