
6/20/2010 c1 i am a girl
l-o-v-e the ending. especially the last 3 lines. write more!
l-o-v-e the ending. especially the last 3 lines. write more!
3/6/2010 c1
2renegade01
aww, cute. ;)
p.s your title's not that lame. it reminds me of cher's song...

aww, cute. ;)
p.s your title's not that lame. it reminds me of cher's song...
2/22/2010 c1 Victor Velazquez
not bad
I finally got at the end that the girl had paranoia
I'd love to read a full length novel about this.
Might right it someday...But I'd credit you
not bad
I finally got at the end that the girl had paranoia
I'd love to read a full length novel about this.
Might right it someday...But I'd credit you