for Stuck with Famly3/20/2010 c1 
7Happy to be Mad
You start this piece of with a brilliant quote, but I think the explanation behind it needs some work. It does not have much or anything to do with the rest of the piece. I think you should either make the Quote more relevant or change the introduction. This is a fun piece to read; interested in where you will go with this if you decide to continue.
7Happy to be MadYou start this piece of with a brilliant quote, but I think the explanation behind it needs some work. It does not have much or anything to do with the rest of the piece. I think you should either make the Quote more relevant or change the introduction. This is a fun piece to read; interested in where you will go with this if you decide to continue.