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2/25/2010 c1 Mitsi
Your story has great writing. There's one problem though. Your story is in "Fiction Rated K" and yet it has a profane cuss word in it that really surprised me. You should change it to Fiction Rated K+ or T for Teen.
2/24/2010 c1 2midnightdancerx
Wow. Holy crap. I'm kind of at a loss for words. I love this. I love this a lot. You feel like you're right there with your main character, and it makes you almost want to cry, because even though it never says what happened to her, it's obvious that she's in a lot of pain. I adored the ending- having a random guy holding her hand while she cried.

This is amazing. Great job, Mel! :)
2/24/2010 c1 19Zombie's Run This Town
Oh, Mel. That was so amazing.

You need to write more.

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