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10/2/2010 c7 applenica
hi! i'm your new reader. i like your story and i learn a lot of things about england's fashion and etc. i hope priscilla can survive in the middle of her debut ^^
9/30/2010 c27 1PeterMoore
priscilla keeps denying ethan. poor ethan... at least priscilla spoke her mind to that awful lady ainsworth. thanks for the update
9/30/2010 c27 4Garneau
Hey,

it's so great that you have a regular system for updating. I love reading the new chapters.

This one was great too. I thought the little interaction between Priscilla and Ethan was so sweet. However, I have the feeling that Priscilla has gone and put the foot in it with her refusal to marry him (especially when she clearly wants to) and her treatment of Lady Ainsworth.

I only realised recently that you write in the present tense. Not many stories do this, but you certainly pull it off. Not to mention you keep it consistant the whole way through. It's a great way of relaying Priscilla's actions and thoughts.

As usual I look forward to the next chapter!

Garneau.
9/30/2010 c27 dee
Well, I must agree with Lady Ainsworth. Pricillia is a spoiled, no manner and ungrateful girl. I hope these attitude will change at the end of the story, because if not, Pricillia just like another Paris Hilton in ancient times.

I'm sorry if I'm too harsh. But, that is my two cents. It's your story anyway. :)
9/30/2010 c27 AbbeyXD
aw poor Priscilla :( so she's not marrying Ethan? Eh I'm sure he'll be able to change her mind :D anyways UPDATE SOON!
9/30/2010 c27 3happyflowers0729
love love love:):):) update soon
9/30/2010 c27 GermanSam not logged in
Aw! I was all happy at the beginning of the chapter with her interaction with Ethan and then you had to include her conversation with Lady Ainsworth. Well, more drama has arrived for sure but I don't want her to leave because that means that she is going to leave Ethan. Ugh! Why do you do this to me? Well, I can't wait for the next chapter as usual and I can't wait for Ethan's reaction to this news!
9/25/2010 c26 1funnechick
Aww, he's in love with her! She is with him as well. She's just in major denial.
9/24/2010 c26 AbbeyXD
aw cute! update soon! absolutely love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! but you didn't mention how much her inheritance was though
9/24/2010 c26 3happyflowers0729
Pleaz dont end it so soon :) and i do love this chapter and your welcome:) is she ever gonna have any friends? its just that other then Ethan there's no one else really that she can confine to and she never really confines to him anyways but i think she would feel less confused if she had a friend of coarse though im not like trying to rule ur story or anything but just saying my openian(i really didnt spell that right) well anyways i have to say out of all of my fave storys (really) this is my fave :) oh and it would be just so FANTASTIC if you put it in Ethans POV too i loved the earlyer one you did with him i would just eat another one up :) :D :P hahahaha update really soon plez :)
9/24/2010 c26 2DisturbingThePeace
Aww we finally get a confession of his love. And I thought it was very funny that Mr. Thumble was so forward about Priscialla being the mother of his children. Lol. That gave me a good laugh. That, and imagining his horrifyin pluk suit. ;)
9/24/2010 c26 1PeterMoore
thanks for the update!
9/24/2010 c26 8GermanSam
Gah! I get so into this story that sometimes, Pricilla just makes me want to pull my hair out. Why can't she just like Ethan back? Oh right because you need plot and stuff to make it the amazing story that it is. I cannot wait for the chapter where she will just let herself like him and not worry about him breaking her heart. I think he's serious when he said he was in love with her. Ah! Update soon!
9/23/2010 c25 4Garneau
Hi,

It's great how that you are subtely making Priscilla used to the idea fo marrying Ethan. In this chapter, her plans to redecorate the study showed this.

I really love Ethan.

Sebastian's character is a confusing one. Priscilla definitely has a predjudice against him, but what he claims to have done speak otherwise to what Priscilla believes his motives are. I like that Priscilla is flawed in her ignorance and naivety.

I really look forward to the next chapter,

Garneau.
9/23/2010 c24 Garneau
Poor conflicted Priscilla.

Again this really well written chapter. I really like Priscilla's character. Her reactions and behaviour seems really relevant and appropriate to me.

I also really love how fleshy your chapters are. They contain a lot and are such a joy to read!

Garneau.
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