7/7/2010 c1 Insanity
This sounds very interesting and, like your other stories realistic and not annoyingly perfect or convenient like most other romantic stories :D I dont know wether to hope you continue it or not, because if you do it would mean that we, your readers, get to enjoy another one of your amazing stories :) but it would also mean less updates for Someday Soon :( Actually, I really do hope that you decide to continue it, because you've already got me interested and captivated, as you usually do with that talent of yours :P Okay, i'm gonna end this insanely long rant of unfiltered thoughts right now :D
This sounds very interesting and, like your other stories realistic and not annoyingly perfect or convenient like most other romantic stories :D I dont know wether to hope you continue it or not, because if you do it would mean that we, your readers, get to enjoy another one of your amazing stories :) but it would also mean less updates for Someday Soon :( Actually, I really do hope that you decide to continue it, because you've already got me interested and captivated, as you usually do with that talent of yours :P Okay, i'm gonna end this insanely long rant of unfiltered thoughts right now :D
7/1/2010 c1 19Graveside Rose
Sounds like a good beginning to a story. Can't wait for the nest few updates. :)
Sounds like a good beginning to a story. Can't wait for the nest few updates. :)
6/6/2010 c1 23plumblossom
It's an interesting setup, makes me want to know what's going to happen. Glad toknow it's additional and not instead of, too . . .
It's an interesting setup, makes me want to know what's going to happen. Glad toknow it's additional and not instead of, too . . .
5/8/2010 c1 XxX.SoundSparrow.XxX
so, Riley left Mel for Luke? is that it? that's what it seems like to me, i dunno if it's right though haha
so, Riley left Mel for Luke? is that it? that's what it seems like to me, i dunno if it's right though haha
3/4/2010 c1 magalina
Ooh, I´m very intrigued. I love this kind of story XD Can´t wait for the next chapter!
Ooh, I´m very intrigued. I love this kind of story XD Can´t wait for the next chapter!
2/25/2010 c1 22NeonX
Excellent chapter. I like how in this story, unlike in many others we see on FP, the ex-girlfriend character is sympathetic. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Excellent chapter. I like how in this story, unlike in many others we see on FP, the ex-girlfriend character is sympathetic. I'm looking forward to reading more.
2/24/2010 c1 ExactlyWhatIWant
This is great! :) I can't wait to see what happened and how their situations came about. Though I can already somewhat guess, I would love to see how you write it out. And who knows, it might not be what I think it is. So please update soon! xD
This is great! :) I can't wait to see what happened and how their situations came about. Though I can already somewhat guess, I would love to see how you write it out. And who knows, it might not be what I think it is. So please update soon! xD
2/24/2010 c1 mad-one123
Dear lordy lord, i love your stories! Im not sure what it is about them, but i always get immedietly hooked on the first chapter with whatever you write. I am very excited for the next chapter! i cant wait to find out more of the story and see the interaction between luke and riley. Oh and also ben and riley. I wonder if Ben likes Riley too?
Dear lordy lord, i love your stories! Im not sure what it is about them, but i always get immedietly hooked on the first chapter with whatever you write. I am very excited for the next chapter! i cant wait to find out more of the story and see the interaction between luke and riley. Oh and also ben and riley. I wonder if Ben likes Riley too?