
9/22/2010 c6
13angellover254
cool story, at first I really thought that jacobs and her was going to end up together, but I am glad that they didnt n she started liking the other guy. He seem so sweet! lol well um u say u were making a sequel and I would love to read it, but I went to check if it was there and i didnt c anything, so if u would please answer back if you r making it or not.

cool story, at first I really thought that jacobs and her was going to end up together, but I am glad that they didnt n she started liking the other guy. He seem so sweet! lol well um u say u were making a sequel and I would love to read it, but I went to check if it was there and i didnt c anything, so if u would please answer back if you r making it or not.
3/8/2010 c6 Celestial-Panda
Great story! That Kemple guy is a creep!
But Cameron is so sweet! I *can't wait* 'til the sequel! :D They've only known each other for a night, but it feels like so much longer! Lolz, keep up the awesome writing ^_^
I don't really watch anime and stuff but one of my best friends does, so this kind of reminds me of her :P.
Great story! That Kemple guy is a creep!
But Cameron is so sweet! I *can't wait* 'til the sequel! :D They've only known each other for a night, but it feels like so much longer! Lolz, keep up the awesome writing ^_^
I don't really watch anime and stuff but one of my best friends does, so this kind of reminds me of her :P.
3/4/2010 c5 zydrate dreamcatcher
*jumps up and down* KINGDON HEARTS! =D I litterally squealed at the name drop of it. ^_^ Kam's definitely a keeper, to restate what i reviewed last time. I can't wait til the next chapter! ^_^
*jumps up and down* KINGDON HEARTS! =D I litterally squealed at the name drop of it. ^_^ Kam's definitely a keeper, to restate what i reviewed last time. I can't wait til the next chapter! ^_^
2/28/2010 c3 zydrate dreamcatcher
ha! i knew jacob was a dirtbag! and i'm excited to learn more about cameron! sadie and adam are cute together.
ha! i knew jacob was a dirtbag! and i'm excited to learn more about cameron! sadie and adam are cute together.
2/26/2010 c2 zydrate dreamcatcher
oh! poor Jacob.. REJECTION! =D however, that's what he deserves if he's going to be an arrogant dirtbag. I'm really looking forward to an update; this story has a great start, and I can't wait to see where it goes. =)
oh! poor Jacob.. REJECTION! =D however, that's what he deserves if he's going to be an arrogant dirtbag. I'm really looking forward to an update; this story has a great start, and I can't wait to see where it goes. =)
2/25/2010 c1 zydrate dreamcatcher
Ooh! you know i have much love for your stories! i can't wait to read the next chapter. =DD also, i find it more than ironic that we have a dance this week, and you think it's stupid. ^_^
Ooh! you know i have much love for your stories! i can't wait to read the next chapter. =DD also, i find it more than ironic that we have a dance this week, and you think it's stupid. ^_^
2/24/2010 c1
6AmazingGrace91
Well, this is an interesting start. It's well-written and I didn't see many mistakes. I'm known for my bloodhound-like ability to sense grammar and spelling errors, so you definitely get two thumbs up from me! ^-^ It's funny, actually. I can't stand manga or anime at all, but I knew about the Naruto-related things you mentioned because one of my best friends loves that show. I don't like Twilight, either. I am, however, a huge "Phantom" fan. :]
I like this. I hope you update soon! :]
~AG91

Well, this is an interesting start. It's well-written and I didn't see many mistakes. I'm known for my bloodhound-like ability to sense grammar and spelling errors, so you definitely get two thumbs up from me! ^-^ It's funny, actually. I can't stand manga or anime at all, but I knew about the Naruto-related things you mentioned because one of my best friends loves that show. I don't like Twilight, either. I am, however, a huge "Phantom" fan. :]
I like this. I hope you update soon! :]
~AG91