
7/11/2010 c1
19static shakedown
I liked the flow in this in the beginning . . . but I got a bit loss after "egg sky let . . . " where the sentence just kept going. That might have been on purpose, though :P

I liked the flow in this in the beginning . . . but I got a bit loss after "egg sky let . . . " where the sentence just kept going. That might have been on purpose, though :P
3/5/2010 c1 Moony08
Nice!
Nice!
2/26/2010 c1 ripplingebbulience
well done!
well done!