4/1/2010 c1 name redacted
I have no idea what the picture must have been of. I just can't get past the borrowing of names from Harry Potter (lol). The use of short sentences moves the peice along effectively, as does the scarcity of adjectives. Interesting apparel description. I wonder if that came from the picture.
I have no idea what the picture must have been of. I just can't get past the borrowing of names from Harry Potter (lol). The use of short sentences moves the peice along effectively, as does the scarcity of adjectives. Interesting apparel description. I wonder if that came from the picture.