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3/6/2010 c1 Mr. Deadman
That was rather depressing, but forgivable due to the excellence of the story. It was very well written and enthralling.

Very Silent Hill-ish and I think would make an awesome game if you ever posed it to Konami. It'd probably be better than the last two (so very frustrating) games.

Anyway, I'm rambling. It was a great one-shot and it'd be fantastic if you wrote a sequel (obviously not with the same characters, but the setting) and delve deeper into the town's background.
3/3/2010 c1 kikyaru360
This was actually rather good. I don't know why you said it wasn't good in the summary. To tell you the truth I liked this a lot.

You have excellent descriptions in here.

Good. Keep 'em comin'.

(P.s. I'm not a fan of happy endings either.)

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