for Professors and Zombies4/7/2011 c1 
28Michael Kelso
I liked the story, I liked the idea, I could see what you were doing, but it was difficult to catch it on the first read. I think a small problem was it was a very dry read. Lots of terminology, dry humor, and a somewhat confusing viewpoint to start out. I wasn't sure at first if it was a memo, a newspaper article, or just third person POV. The brainstorming was also a little confusing at first. Maybe (If I could be so bold) you could have underclassmen standing on ladders, dropping brains on the professors, instead of them throwing brains at each other. Then it would truly be "brainstorming". I do think it's awesome to make fun of zombies, it is something original and a little off kilter (which is what I like in humor anyway). Overall, I really liked your story, it just took a little getting used to.
28Michael KelsoI liked the story, I liked the idea, I could see what you were doing, but it was difficult to catch it on the first read. I think a small problem was it was a very dry read. Lots of terminology, dry humor, and a somewhat confusing viewpoint to start out. I wasn't sure at first if it was a memo, a newspaper article, or just third person POV. The brainstorming was also a little confusing at first. Maybe (If I could be so bold) you could have underclassmen standing on ladders, dropping brains on the professors, instead of them throwing brains at each other. Then it would truly be "brainstorming". I do think it's awesome to make fun of zombies, it is something original and a little off kilter (which is what I like in humor anyway). Overall, I really liked your story, it just took a little getting used to.
9/3/2010 c1 16Serendipitist Swan
This sounds so professional, surprising in a parody. Despite the short length I greatly enjoyed it.
16Serendipitist SwanThis sounds so professional, surprising in a parody. Despite the short length I greatly enjoyed it.
5/29/2010 c1 yuanyuan
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4/9/2010 c1 12elisefey
While the brains made me feel a tad bit queasy, I have to admit that my experience with universities made me love this. Thank you for PMing me about my community, I never would have found this story otherwise!
12elisefeyWhile the brains made me feel a tad bit queasy, I have to admit that my experience with universities made me love this. Thank you for PMing me about my community, I never would have found this story otherwise!
3/2/2010 c1 Curtis J. Sindrey
This is an interesting concept. I'm curious to see where you go with this.
Keep up the good work.
This is an interesting concept. I'm curious to see where you go with this.
Keep up the good work.