for Say It Right2/3/2011 c20 
1AlexisLovesYou
OMG! I can't believe they broke up! WTF? That literally made me cry. Will is such an idiot for choosing Eva - bitch - over her. Ugh... I hope they get back together.
1AlexisLovesYouOMG! I can't believe they broke up! WTF? That literally made me cry. Will is such an idiot for choosing Eva - bitch - over her. Ugh... I hope they get back together.
1/12/2011 c19 JiMel
Ohh man...
Jamie obviously doesn't get it, does he? She's with Will now!
Btw...great "cliffhanger" :P I can't wait to see how Will will react...
Please update soon
Ohh man...
Jamie obviously doesn't get it, does he? She's with Will now!
Btw...great "cliffhanger" :P I can't wait to see how Will will react...
Please update soon
12/28/2010 c19 AlexisLovesYou
YAY! You're back!
I can't believe that Jamie proposed. Can't he take a hint? If you couldn't tell, I'm really cheering for will here. :)
YAY! You're back!
I can't believe that Jamie proposed. Can't he take a hint? If you couldn't tell, I'm really cheering for will here. :)
12/28/2010 c19 cosmopolitan
holy shit
trying to process this
but kinda cant
hope jamie doesnt disapear from this story after this
cant wait to see wills reaction
...and jordan!
omg
so much
so excited
thanks for posting!
holy shit
trying to process this
but kinda cant
hope jamie doesnt disapear from this story after this
cant wait to see wills reaction
...and jordan!
omg
so much
so excited
thanks for posting!
11/8/2010 c18 JiMel
Well, her own apartment is a good start. I liked the scene when Will came back from the road trip. :) But this Evgeniya Koslov, "Eva" is also a person I really DON'T like. I guess there'll be a lot of trouble with her sooner or later & Eva even has the guts to show up at her flat? :O
- But I didn't really like Will's reaction, because he acted really strange & that more than once. And Ryan Albright...hmm, he also seems strange & you don't really know if you can believe everything he says.
Good writing :) xx
Well, her own apartment is a good start. I liked the scene when Will came back from the road trip. :) But this Evgeniya Koslov, "Eva" is also a person I really DON'T like. I guess there'll be a lot of trouble with her sooner or later & Eva even has the guts to show up at her flat? :O
- But I didn't really like Will's reaction, because he acted really strange & that more than once. And Ryan Albright...hmm, he also seems strange & you don't really know if you can believe everything he says.
Good writing :) xx
10/25/2010 c18 9Rumor Mills
I just want to tell you that I really enjoy this story. It's so full of drama which is something I absolutely love. I like how you don't reveal everything all at once which keeps me guessing and coming back. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more!
9Rumor MillsI just want to tell you that I really enjoy this story. It's so full of drama which is something I absolutely love. I like how you don't reveal everything all at once which keeps me guessing and coming back. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more!
10/3/2010 c17 JiMel
Valentine's Day :) YAY
Will's the best man on earth :) He made that evening just perfect for all of them.
Olivia finally got to see her best friend again, & WIll & Olivia spend a lot of time together etc.
NEW YORK :) I
Valentine's Day :) YAY
Will's the best man on earth :) He made that evening just perfect for all of them.
Olivia finally got to see her best friend again, & WIll & Olivia spend a lot of time together etc.
NEW YORK :) I
10/3/2010 c16 JiMel
WOW, what a chapter! :O
Sure, finding out about Olivia's & Will's relationship that way is kinda idk...shitty, but I think he's overreacting anyway.
She's his sister & he should accept that she's dating a guy who he might not like. It's still her life. But on the other hand, maybe, she should have told him about them sooner, this way they could have avoided all that stuff.
Btw, I don't like Kylie, lol...^^
Sry for the long comment :P
Good job :) xx
WOW, what a chapter! :O
Sure, finding out about Olivia's & Will's relationship that way is kinda idk...shitty, but I think he's overreacting anyway.
She's his sister & he should accept that she's dating a guy who he might not like. It's still her life. But on the other hand, maybe, she should have told him about them sooner, this way they could have avoided all that stuff.
Btw, I don't like Kylie, lol...^^
Sry for the long comment :P
Good job :) xx
9/19/2010 c13 ramenrandomness
There's something more to the crap from his past, isn't there? Was he married and divorced or something?
There's something more to the crap from his past, isn't there? Was he married and divorced or something?
8/13/2010 c15 macam
this is a good story, after reading i cant help but wonder why jordan seems like a prick sometimes? Anyway i cant wait for your next chapter please update soon!
this is a good story, after reading i cant help but wonder why jordan seems like a prick sometimes? Anyway i cant wait for your next chapter please update soon!