for Say It Right8/12/2010 c15 JiMel
Haha...LOL I LOVED the conversation between Olivia and Holly :)
& the end was pretty cool :P
Will seems to be like a hottie, hehe :D
Awesome job :) xx
Haha...LOL I LOVED the conversation between Olivia and Holly :)
& the end was pretty cool :P
Will seems to be like a hottie, hehe :D
Awesome job :) xx
8/10/2010 c15 
2wuteva4eva456
Awesome story! You have a gift for writing. Jamie's kind of a douche bag. Please update soon!
2wuteva4eva456Awesome story! You have a gift for writing. Jamie's kind of a douche bag. Please update soon!
8/10/2010 c15 Jae
Aw poor Rochelle! Glad that she finally told Will what was up with Jamie, hopefully he'll explain himself too soon.
Aw poor Rochelle! Glad that she finally told Will what was up with Jamie, hopefully he'll explain himself too soon.
8/10/2010 c15 cosmopolitan
*sigh* drama-rama (yay) but i am interested in the moment that it hits her that in all that he never really reciprocated, he didnt disclose...
*sigh* drama-rama (yay) but i am interested in the moment that it hits her that in all that he never really reciprocated, he didnt disclose...
8/4/2010 c14 JiMel
Yeah & what a progress :)
They FINALLY kissed...aww they're so cute together & but Whitney is rlly getting on my nerves, LOL
I so so so can't wait for the next chapter =) xx
Yeah & what a progress :)
They FINALLY kissed...aww they're so cute together & but Whitney is rlly getting on my nerves, LOL
I so so so can't wait for the next chapter =) xx
8/3/2010 c14 1Torrance
So, i have been really bad at reviewing your chapters. Life has been busy, which is new.
I'm loving this more and more as you update. I don't care for Jamie as he is bugging the hell out of me by how he is acting. But I'm trying to keep an open mind towards him cuz i feel like that there may be more than we know. lol. i love Will and i can't wait to learn what he has been through cuz we know that something happened to get where he is now. Gotta love Jordan for passing out but i think his partying a little heavy. It almost like that there could be problem with him and drinking. and lastly i think Olivia is should be with Will. lol that is my thought but she is well develop and i like that.
good chapter, cant wait for more :)
Btw how is your hand? also that is great that you are almost done with college. I'm have been sending ing app. to colleges to go to next fall after im done w community college. :)
Until next time :)
Torrance
1TorranceSo, i have been really bad at reviewing your chapters. Life has been busy, which is new.
I'm loving this more and more as you update. I don't care for Jamie as he is bugging the hell out of me by how he is acting. But I'm trying to keep an open mind towards him cuz i feel like that there may be more than we know. lol. i love Will and i can't wait to learn what he has been through cuz we know that something happened to get where he is now. Gotta love Jordan for passing out but i think his partying a little heavy. It almost like that there could be problem with him and drinking. and lastly i think Olivia is should be with Will. lol that is my thought but she is well develop and i like that.
good chapter, cant wait for more :)
Btw how is your hand? also that is great that you are almost done with college. I'm have been sending ing app. to colleges to go to next fall after im done w community college. :)
Until next time :)
Torrance
8/2/2010 c14 cosmopolitan
rushing rushing rushing
but thank you thank you thak you. this was such a pleasure to read, dear, truly!
rushing rushing rushing
but thank you thank you thak you. this was such a pleasure to read, dear, truly!
8/2/2010 c13 JiMel
YAY "She's free from Jamie" :)
The last part was awesome... they're slwoly making process :)
I'm just wondering when Jordan finds out about it & how he'll react.
I'm in love with your story, PLEASE don't let us wait for the next chappy :) xx
YAY "She's free from Jamie" :)
The last part was awesome... they're slwoly making process :)
I'm just wondering when Jordan finds out about it & how he'll react.
I'm in love with your story, PLEASE don't let us wait for the next chappy :) xx
7/26/2010 c12 ladidadida
LOVE THIS :D :D :D
LOVE THIS :D :D :D
7/1/2010 c12 JiMel
Yeah, that would have been perfect :)
But what the hell does Jamie want NOW - now, that she found someone else, she liked?
I hope their won't be any trouble, though xD I mean, he (Jamie) was the one who chose another woman, and now, when she finally found another guy who she really likes, he appears, gosh :S
Now, i really can't wait for the next chapter =D
Yeah, that would have been perfect :)
But what the hell does Jamie want NOW - now, that she found someone else, she liked?
I hope their won't be any trouble, though xD I mean, he (Jamie) was the one who chose another woman, and now, when she finally found another guy who she really likes, he appears, gosh :S
Now, i really can't wait for the next chapter =D
6/30/2010 c12 A.R.R
Ah, of course Jamie had to interrupt! But I am interested in seeing what he has to say to Olivia.
Ah, of course Jamie had to interrupt! But I am interested in seeing what he has to say to Olivia.
6/30/2010 c12 MyNameIs-Madison
Love it !
not supposed to be on computer ,so i have to make it short .
Love it !
not supposed to be on computer ,so i have to make it short .