for Say It Right3/3/2010 c3 A.R.R
I'm so excited! I love all of your other stories and it seems like they keep getting better. I really love this story already and it just started!
I'm so excited! I love all of your other stories and it seems like they keep getting better. I really love this story already and it just started!
3/3/2010 c3 
4quotata
I was actually looking forward to the college part of the story when you started chapter one, but considering all the drama that's happening now, it was a great choice to jump forward seven years.
Jamie's likable character comes undone with the confession, but I'm sure that's all part of your plan. Everything else about him seems consistent with his character.
Would it be presumptuous to label Fizz as an arse now, rather than wait to see if he changes in the future? Because I really like Olivia at the moment and I just want to slap him for his arrogance and disregard.
4quotataI was actually looking forward to the college part of the story when you started chapter one, but considering all the drama that's happening now, it was a great choice to jump forward seven years.
Jamie's likable character comes undone with the confession, but I'm sure that's all part of your plan. Everything else about him seems consistent with his character.
Would it be presumptuous to label Fizz as an arse now, rather than wait to see if he changes in the future? Because I really like Olivia at the moment and I just want to slap him for his arrogance and disregard.
3/3/2010 c3 5Britt Woods
I love this story so far! I'm a big fan of your prior work and this does not disappoint so far! The whole idea of it is interesting. I wasn't expecting the truth to come out so soon but I kind of like that. This could cause some drama that we don't always get to see.
5Britt WoodsI love this story so far! I'm a big fan of your prior work and this does not disappoint so far! The whole idea of it is interesting. I wasn't expecting the truth to come out so soon but I kind of like that. This could cause some drama that we don't always get to see.
3/3/2010 c2 3Loveless Breath
Hey! It's good so far, I really like it. I, sadly, have been procrastinating hardcore and I have to finish a paper. so... I SHALL BE BACK! Good job so far, i like how the prologue ties into the story (like when Olivia is feeling anxious about Jamie liking her, you know he all ready does)
3Loveless BreathHey! It's good so far, I really like it. I, sadly, have been procrastinating hardcore and I have to finish a paper. so... I SHALL BE BACK! Good job so far, i like how the prologue ties into the story (like when Olivia is feeling anxious about Jamie liking her, you know he all ready does)
3/3/2010 c2 2babykezyx
hey, I really like your story so far.
I would have appreciated more of a hook for me to really want to read on but other than that, I love it!
How funny is Whitney? She's so random - a bit weird though (I agree with Olivia)
And yummy Jamie *drools*
Need more written! Write more please! :D
But I just want to add, Roshelle only got added in at the end and I would really have liked it if she was involved more, not like "Where'd she come from?"
Other than that? Love :)
Please come and read and review my story (its called Easy as 1 2 3)
You might be confused a bit at the beginning like a lot of people have said but I would really appreciate if you read the whole stoy (the chapters aren't that big) so far and tell me your opinion with an open mind to my style of writing.
Thank you and I hope you write more soon :)
2babykezyxhey, I really like your story so far.
I would have appreciated more of a hook for me to really want to read on but other than that, I love it!
How funny is Whitney? She's so random - a bit weird though (I agree with Olivia)
And yummy Jamie *drools*
Need more written! Write more please! :D
But I just want to add, Roshelle only got added in at the end and I would really have liked it if she was involved more, not like "Where'd she come from?"
Other than that? Love :)
Please come and read and review my story (its called Easy as 1 2 3)
You might be confused a bit at the beginning like a lot of people have said but I would really appreciate if you read the whole stoy (the chapters aren't that big) so far and tell me your opinion with an open mind to my style of writing.
Thank you and I hope you write more soon :)
3/3/2010 c2 3blonski
HOLY SHIT! So...i haven't finished even reading this chapter, but i HAD to send you this. BECAUSE: A) When i was a freshman in college (last year) I lived in the dorms and went in blind my roommate's first name was (and still is, you guessed it!) WHITNEY! The craziness doesn't end there, BUT her mom is a hairstylist, so, when i first met her, her hair was SOO blonde it was almost white! Just thought i'd let you know how excited i am about all of this. Unfortunately, my name is not Olivia...but Lauren. A depressing fact. lol, Great job so far!
3blonskiHOLY SHIT! So...i haven't finished even reading this chapter, but i HAD to send you this. BECAUSE: A) When i was a freshman in college (last year) I lived in the dorms and went in blind my roommate's first name was (and still is, you guessed it!) WHITNEY! The craziness doesn't end there, BUT her mom is a hairstylist, so, when i first met her, her hair was SOO blonde it was almost white! Just thought i'd let you know how excited i am about all of this. Unfortunately, my name is not Olivia...but Lauren. A depressing fact. lol, Great job so far!