for The Cradle3/8/2010 c1 
8Pandora's Flight
This reminds me of a mix between Dexter and The Last House on the Left.
I enjoyed it though.
"He was afraid if he saw how wrong the world was, he just might do something about it"
Interesting introspection. Hmm...
Makes me want to go out and kill all the murderers and rapists in the world. Ironic.
8Pandora's FlightThis reminds me of a mix between Dexter and The Last House on the Left.
I enjoyed it though.
"He was afraid if he saw how wrong the world was, he just might do something about it"
Interesting introspection. Hmm...
Makes me want to go out and kill all the murderers and rapists in the world. Ironic.
3/4/2010 c1 Deleted Forever
I really liked that. Especially the part where he was pressing Derek's wounds. One thing, though. When you said that he gripped Derek by his shirt collar... you forgot the "r". Just thought you might want to fix that. :)
Great story!
I really liked that. Especially the part where he was pressing Derek's wounds. One thing, though. When you said that he gripped Derek by his shirt collar... you forgot the "r". Just thought you might want to fix that. :)
Great story!
3/3/2010 c1 8Leona Patricia
This is a really good piece of writing. I enjoyed your style of writing. It kind of pulls you in enough to make the reader really want to know more. I look forward to reading more of your stuff :)
8Leona PatriciaThis is a really good piece of writing. I enjoyed your style of writing. It kind of pulls you in enough to make the reader really want to know more. I look forward to reading more of your stuff :)