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4/17/2010 c1 12D0ll
Ok I'm terrible at reviews I think. But I still try.

Anyway I hate jello people too.

They start rumors gossip and all that bad stuff.

(They fester and frive in schools!)

I like your writing its simple but detail jelousy pretty good =)
3/5/2010 c1 29Unmasked identity
Its great!You are a great poet and story writer! Keep on writing!
3/3/2010 c1 1esthaelum
This was great! You really captured the atmosphere well! Jealousy really is a terrible emotion, isn't it?

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