for My Dark Angel8/7/2013 c1 Lady of the Red
D'awwwww!
D'awwwww!
8/17/2011 c1 Bookwormgirl
I really liked this, it was very sweet without being sappy. Do you think you could write another chapter with the guy's POV? I would love to get inside his head.
I really liked this, it was very sweet without being sappy. Do you think you could write another chapter with the guy's POV? I would love to get inside his head.
6/16/2011 c1 
16mizgardenia21
I liked this one! It was interesting and unique because of the way you wrote it, I really enjoyed reading it.
16mizgardenia21I liked this one! It was interesting and unique because of the way you wrote it, I really enjoyed reading it.
1/23/2011 c1 Juliet
Nice piece of work!
Nice piece of work!
1/16/2011 c1 Millie
Col !
Col !
3/4/2010 c1 8sealednectar
I liked this. It was good and you got into the character's mind. The line at the end seemed to formal and out of place. "There is nothing to fear, for I am right beside you, forever...as yours." I think their discussion should've been longer. Other than that, it was good.
8sealednectarI liked this. It was good and you got into the character's mind. The line at the end seemed to formal and out of place. "There is nothing to fear, for I am right beside you, forever...as yours." I think their discussion should've been longer. Other than that, it was good.
3/4/2010 c1 1Manna Renee
Wow, very well done. I was impressed by the unsusual mix of characters. The grammer wasn't perfect, but it made an excellent oneshot. Great job!
1Manna ReneeWow, very well done. I was impressed by the unsusual mix of characters. The grammer wasn't perfect, but it made an excellent oneshot. Great job!