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7/15/2012 c1 612simpleplan13
Thanks for your review awhile back. I apologize it took me so long to return the favor.

I like the piece. It's short and pretty description of the moon. Fitting for a haiku. The only thing is I really feel like there needs to be some sort of punctuation between the second and third line.

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10/9/2011 c1 3mtorchic
That was a really pretty Hiaku. My sister would love it. You should make a whole collection of those and put them on here. I enjoy reading them.
9/29/2011 c1 GoneAway-MightNotBeReturning
Beautiful imagery and lovely descriptions.

I can just picture the entire night, despite the brevity of the entire poem. Love this!

~ Daphne
9/5/2011 c1 6Natalie Field
Very nice. I like the image. Though I wonder why the night was helpless... :]

3/4/2010 c1 28frugale
I like the first line, it's a whole new take on the moon, which is often depicted as something almost sacred. So, I like the 'object' concept! Nice haiku!
3/4/2010 c1 167nickyO
interesting word choice, "helpless", nice image.
3/4/2010 c1 8sealednectar
Beautiful imagery.

'Helpless' makes it more interesting. The reader wonders why the night is helpless.

Keep it up.

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