for The Lunar Moon7/15/2012 c1 
612simpleplan13
Thanks for your review awhile back. I apologize it took me so long to return the favor.
I like the piece. It's short and pretty description of the moon. Fitting for a haiku. The only thing is I really feel like there needs to be some sort of punctuation between the second and third line.
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612simpleplan13Thanks for your review awhile back. I apologize it took me so long to return the favor.
I like the piece. It's short and pretty description of the moon. Fitting for a haiku. The only thing is I really feel like there needs to be some sort of punctuation between the second and third line.
PS Check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).
10/9/2011 c1 3mtorchic
That was a really pretty Hiaku. My sister would love it. You should make a whole collection of those and put them on here. I enjoy reading them.
3mtorchicThat was a really pretty Hiaku. My sister would love it. You should make a whole collection of those and put them on here. I enjoy reading them.
9/29/2011 c1 GoneAway-MightNotBeReturning
Beautiful imagery and lovely descriptions.
I can just picture the entire night, despite the brevity of the entire poem. Love this!
~ Daphne
Beautiful imagery and lovely descriptions.
I can just picture the entire night, despite the brevity of the entire poem. Love this!
~ Daphne
9/5/2011 c1 6Natalie Field
Very nice. I like the image. Though I wonder why the night was helpless... :]
~Natalie
6Natalie FieldVery nice. I like the image. Though I wonder why the night was helpless... :]
~Natalie
3/4/2010 c1 28frugale
I like the first line, it's a whole new take on the moon, which is often depicted as something almost sacred. So, I like the 'object' concept! Nice haiku!
28frugaleI like the first line, it's a whole new take on the moon, which is often depicted as something almost sacred. So, I like the 'object' concept! Nice haiku!
3/4/2010 c1 8sealednectar
Beautiful imagery.
'Helpless' makes it more interesting. The reader wonders why the night is helpless.
Keep it up.
8sealednectarBeautiful imagery.
'Helpless' makes it more interesting. The reader wonders why the night is helpless.
Keep it up.