for Best of You5/3/2010 c17 
8Sentiment For Lost Creatures
Another great chapter :)
Don't let AJ fuck things up for Mike and Elijah!
8Sentiment For Lost CreaturesAnother great chapter :)
Don't let AJ fuck things up for Mike and Elijah!
4/29/2010 c15 VivianJYJ
OMG! I just realize that my previous review is a mes, dunno why the sentences were cut @_@ I'm sure u was like "wat the hell?" lol What i wanna say is that Iove those two, and their love even though it's a lil fast xD but yeah, love can happen just in the blink of eyes lol usually I like to read the characters get miserable or angst, but with Mike and Elijah, I love them just like this hehehe
And, I was begging u, plz dun have a threesome~ I'm all about monogamy, and with these two, I just wanna see them just all over each other all the time~ no one else involed plz, pretty plz?
Ok, idk if it got cut again or mess up~ but it's just my tiny favor xD I'll shut up now ;)
Love
OMG! I just realize that my previous review is a mes, dunno why the sentences were cut @_@ I'm sure u was like "wat the hell?" lol What i wanna say is that Iove those two, and their love even though it's a lil fast xD but yeah, love can happen just in the blink of eyes lol usually I like to read the characters get miserable or angst, but with Mike and Elijah, I love them just like this hehehe
And, I was begging u, plz dun have a threesome~ I'm all about monogamy, and with these two, I just wanna see them just all over each other all the time~ no one else involed plz, pretty plz?
Ok, idk if it got cut again or mess up~ but it's just my tiny favor xD I'll shut up now ;)
Love
4/26/2010 c16 12scharlie18
OH NOES! THE WORLD WILL END W/OUT B.O.Y! *screams and runs away in a total panic while everyone else looks at her weirdly*
12scharlie18OH NOES! THE WORLD WILL END W/OUT B.O.Y! *screams and runs away in a total panic while everyone else looks at her weirdly*
4/25/2010 c16 nothing.else.is
I just want to tell you how much I LOVE this story. It is so nice to read a fic where the characters go more than two chapters without cheating or getting jealous or being angsty about something. It's really nice. And I know at the beginning of one of the chapters you said that you had some drama coming up for the characters...I just hope it's nothing too bad. It's really lovely to read about two characters who are just so blissfully in love.
I just want to tell you how much I LOVE this story. It is so nice to read a fic where the characters go more than two chapters without cheating or getting jealous or being angsty about something. It's really nice. And I know at the beginning of one of the chapters you said that you had some drama coming up for the characters...I just hope it's nothing too bad. It's really lovely to read about two characters who are just so blissfully in love.
4/25/2010 c16 briieart
Wow. I wasn't going to start reading this again until you caught up to the chapter you were on as your old SN but I'm glad I read this chapter. It's like something completely new, and I'm really enjoying it. Thanks. :)
Wow. I wasn't going to start reading this again until you caught up to the chapter you were on as your old SN but I'm glad I read this chapter. It's like something completely new, and I'm really enjoying it. Thanks. :)
4/25/2010 c16 VivianJYJ
Oh god! I thought I'll never gonna find this fic ever again~ u dunno how happy I was when I suddenly check my email and saw ur mail about rewrite it and under different name hahaha
anw, back with the story, I really love this . I love how two of them just all over each other and no one else, pretty plz?
Ok, I'll shut up now. Sorry, I'm not good at this, just rambling
lolz
Love :x
Oh god! I thought I'll never gonna find this fic ever again~ u dunno how happy I was when I suddenly check my email and saw ur mail about rewrite it and under different name hahaha
anw, back with the story, I really love this . I love how two of them just all over each other and no one else, pretty plz?
Ok, I'll shut up now. Sorry, I'm not good at this, just rambling
lolz
Love :x
4/24/2010 c16 A.Written.Tragedy
Oh my... please please PLEASE tell me that you're going to have Joe in a threesome with them. I BEG you. Gods.. that would be *so* hot. *fans self*
Oh my... please please PLEASE tell me that you're going to have Joe in a threesome with them. I BEG you. Gods.. that would be *so* hot. *fans self*
4/24/2010 c16 1Bacardi Mint
You scared me Dx Yess, please continue. Also, threesome idea. What I'm thinking is YES PLEASE.
1Bacardi MintYou scared me Dx Yess, please continue. Also, threesome idea. What I'm thinking is YES PLEASE.
4/20/2010 c8 Dark Lynnette
I'm very surprised that I like this story. I don't really know what made me decide to read it, but I'm sorta glad that I did. I enjoy the style and the first person pov. I even like how you changed it up so we can get another viewpoint. Strangely enough your style changed when you switched from Mike to Elijah. Very cool. I can definitely tell who's narrating. The relationship, though improbable, comes across as believable and authentic. Not something often done well. Hats off to you. I'm eager to read more. Thank you!
I'm very surprised that I like this story. I don't really know what made me decide to read it, but I'm sorta glad that I did. I enjoy the style and the first person pov. I even like how you changed it up so we can get another viewpoint. Strangely enough your style changed when you switched from Mike to Elijah. Very cool. I can definitely tell who's narrating. The relationship, though improbable, comes across as believable and authentic. Not something often done well. Hats off to you. I'm eager to read more. Thank you!
4/18/2010 c11 JinniG
ok, I haven't even finished reading the chapter, but you gave me a right scare! I freaked out for about a minute...knowing it can't be true, but what do I know...I was still freaking out! Sheesh...give me a heart-attack why don't you! Do ya feel better about yourself now? Do ya?
:D
ok, I haven't even finished reading the chapter, but you gave me a right scare! I freaked out for about a minute...knowing it can't be true, but what do I know...I was still freaking out! Sheesh...give me a heart-attack why don't you! Do ya feel better about yourself now? Do ya?
:D
4/18/2010 c10 JinniG
well, if my teddy will be in danger :D...
I think the story is really sweet...That's probably the wrong word. I should use a word like, "hot", but actually I do think it's sweet the way they love each other.
The way you write also flows really well. There's a lot of...*clears throat* bedroom scenes, which includes shower scenes, but I think the way you write it, it doesn't feel smutty or anything, if that makes sense. I'm a weird person, but I think sex can be innocent, especially when it's between people who love each other in such an innocent way.
I also really like the character development. Yes, people can fall in love that easily, and you've managed to convey that, I think.
well, if my teddy will be in danger :D...
I think the story is really sweet...That's probably the wrong word. I should use a word like, "hot", but actually I do think it's sweet the way they love each other.
The way you write also flows really well. There's a lot of...*clears throat* bedroom scenes, which includes shower scenes, but I think the way you write it, it doesn't feel smutty or anything, if that makes sense. I'm a weird person, but I think sex can be innocent, especially when it's between people who love each other in such an innocent way.
I also really like the character development. Yes, people can fall in love that easily, and you've managed to convey that, I think.