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16Azon220
This is amazingly written. I can't put it into mere words. This brings to mind Stephen King. Could you expand on this? It's very well put together.
16Azon220This is amazingly written. I can't put it into mere words. This brings to mind Stephen King. Could you expand on this? It's very well put together.
10/26/2015 c1 Guest
The description is absolutely beautiful! You have just the right balance, it's neither lacking description or overflowing with it. You should be proud of yourself! The ending was unexpected, I am still left thinking if it was imagined because there was no trace of the house left -them sorts of endings are the best, where you're left still thinking about what's really happened. The punctuation seems to be spot on too, so well done! :-D I can't think of anything negative at all, normally I pick up on punctuation, but as mentioned above it appears to be correctly used.
I am new to the website and I'm wondering if you could please spare a few moments and dedicate it to reading the first chapter of a story I've uploaded? I've pasted the link below, criticism would be great thank you!
s/3268202/1/Far-From-Human-The-Edge-of-Resurrection
The description is absolutely beautiful! You have just the right balance, it's neither lacking description or overflowing with it. You should be proud of yourself! The ending was unexpected, I am still left thinking if it was imagined because there was no trace of the house left -them sorts of endings are the best, where you're left still thinking about what's really happened. The punctuation seems to be spot on too, so well done! :-D I can't think of anything negative at all, normally I pick up on punctuation, but as mentioned above it appears to be correctly used.
I am new to the website and I'm wondering if you could please spare a few moments and dedicate it to reading the first chapter of a story I've uploaded? I've pasted the link below, criticism would be great thank you!
s/3268202/1/Far-From-Human-The-Edge-of-Resurrection
1/6/2013 c1 rejected.freak
i really love your story, but when my classmate read this on my phone via mobile site, she told me the story is too predictable. but to me, it's just perrrrfect. kudos to your story. \m/
i really love your story, but when my classmate read this on my phone via mobile site, she told me the story is too predictable. but to me, it's just perrrrfect. kudos to your story. \m/
10/24/2012 c1 eb
This is really good. I really like the description at the beginning of the house :D
This is really good. I really like the description at the beginning of the house :D
9/1/2010 c1 7Wednesday's Cannibal
This is very well written. It has all the elements of being a good chiller story. You pulled it together seamlessly, and for that, I thank you. There were a few spots that I noticed that needed a little editing, such as insignificant little words that were confused with other insignificant little words. O few "they"s that should have been "the"s, things like that. But other than that, very, very good.
-Laz
7Wednesday's CannibalThis is very well written. It has all the elements of being a good chiller story. You pulled it together seamlessly, and for that, I thank you. There were a few spots that I noticed that needed a little editing, such as insignificant little words that were confused with other insignificant little words. O few "they"s that should have been "the"s, things like that. But other than that, very, very good.
-Laz
6/18/2010 c1 Nice
Very descriptive, and the ending was a nice touch to the story.
Very descriptive, and the ending was a nice touch to the story.
3/10/2010 c1 kosmo
This is an incredible story that captures the small town lifestyle perfectly in an ominous harvest.
This is an incredible story that captures the small town lifestyle perfectly in an ominous harvest.
3/8/2010 c1 16Cheeseraptor5
I really can't stress enough how beautifully written I found this, so I'll leave it at that. Great style, imagery, etc. Also, I loved the ambiguity of the ending, bravo on that.
16Cheeseraptor5I really can't stress enough how beautifully written I found this, so I'll leave it at that. Great style, imagery, etc. Also, I loved the ambiguity of the ending, bravo on that.
3/7/2010 c1 2I Am The Masquerade
This was very wonderfully written. The imagery in it was very vivid and beautiful, and the ending was just right for this type of writing. This story was lovely in its subtle creepiness, and it leaves the reader wondering what really happened. Congrats on writing such a wonderful piece of horror.
-Masq
2I Am The MasqueradeThis was very wonderfully written. The imagery in it was very vivid and beautiful, and the ending was just right for this type of writing. This story was lovely in its subtle creepiness, and it leaves the reader wondering what really happened. Congrats on writing such a wonderful piece of horror.
-Masq
3/5/2010 c1 1VirgilCarney
I liked this, i pictured it all in my head and it was pretty creepy. The plot would make a good movie.
1VirgilCarneyI liked this, i pictured it all in my head and it was pretty creepy. The plot would make a good movie.
3/4/2010 c1 9saintsinnerlady
This was really wonderful. you painted such a beautiful picture of the wheat feilds i felt like i was standing there. and the tension and creepieness of it, it was really great. i found myself afraid for him, i thought for sure he was going to become a part of the wheat! great job!
~Saint
{[ With love, from The Match Book]}
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9saintsinnerladyThis was really wonderful. you painted such a beautiful picture of the wheat feilds i felt like i was standing there. and the tension and creepieness of it, it was really great. i found myself afraid for him, i thought for sure he was going to become a part of the wheat! great job!
~Saint
{[ With love, from The Match Book]}
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3/4/2010 c1 30Althea Dreamer
Very creepy. I like your imagery of the wheat and soil. The descriptions really add to the mood. Good job.
30Althea DreamerVery creepy. I like your imagery of the wheat and soil. The descriptions really add to the mood. Good job.