for To Whom It May Concern3/5/2010 c1 
124in theory
I found this weird, some parts are really thought provoking, others just seem flung in for the hell of it. I loved the pessimist stanza. I still don't think I understand your point in the 'broken' stanza. And I dream a lot when awake, so I found the last two lines a bit irrelevant but I still really enjoyed this, despite this review probably convincing you otherwise. It's interesting, if nothing else.
Jack
124in theoryI found this weird, some parts are really thought provoking, others just seem flung in for the hell of it. I loved the pessimist stanza. I still don't think I understand your point in the 'broken' stanza. And I dream a lot when awake, so I found the last two lines a bit irrelevant but I still really enjoyed this, despite this review probably convincing you otherwise. It's interesting, if nothing else.
Jack
3/5/2010 c1 46Runekaster
I like this; it's interesting, thoughtful, sweet and a bit cute. Just one thing, though:
"To dreamers...
Wake up."
I'd rather continue to dream, if you will
46RunekasterI like this; it's interesting, thoughtful, sweet and a bit cute. Just one thing, though:
"To dreamers...
Wake up."
I'd rather continue to dream, if you will