for Our Theories of Wings4/2/2011 c1 
5thefaultinourpatronus
I absolutely love how you wrote in second person. I think you've got a really unique character here - her thought processes and observations are so succinct and straight forward it's amazing. I also liked how you described the 'Tainted Wings Theory' and how they depend of the person. Creative piece, excellent work. :)
x mandy
PS. I know you said you didn't need any returned reviews, but this was so awesome that I felt I had to! ;)
5thefaultinourpatronusI absolutely love how you wrote in second person. I think you've got a really unique character here - her thought processes and observations are so succinct and straight forward it's amazing. I also liked how you described the 'Tainted Wings Theory' and how they depend of the person. Creative piece, excellent work. :)
x mandy
PS. I know you said you didn't need any returned reviews, but this was so awesome that I felt I had to! ;)
3/30/2011 c1 1StoryMonster
Your descriptions and observations were very well written and interesting to read. You writing style - awesome.
~StoryMonster
1StoryMonsterYour descriptions and observations were very well written and interesting to read. You writing style - awesome.
~StoryMonster
3/26/2011 c2 7Fedorachild
Aweh. I've really loved your first chapter from the beginning, but I didn't know you were planning to turn it into a story. I like how it's going so far! :)
7FedorachildAweh. I've really loved your first chapter from the beginning, but I didn't know you were planning to turn it into a story. I like how it's going so far! :)
4/13/2010 c3 Fedorachild
Once again, awesome! I'm glad that you're deciding to continue this story :)
Anyways, Keep updating!
Once again, awesome! I'm glad that you're deciding to continue this story :)
Anyways, Keep updating!
3/16/2010 c2 125MidnightSun95
Great again! I love your writing style. Simple yet descriptive. :) You did a great job at grasping the emotions that would go through a person who suffered from leprosy. How they wouldn't fit it. Good job. XD
125MidnightSun95Great again! I love your writing style. Simple yet descriptive. :) You did a great job at grasping the emotions that would go through a person who suffered from leprosy. How they wouldn't fit it. Good job. XD
3/10/2010 c1 Randomness Is My Drug
Wow. Just wow! So much description, I could just feel the sadness! There'd better be more of this! xx
Wow. Just wow! So much description, I could just feel the sadness! There'd better be more of this! xx
3/10/2010 c1 7Fedorachild
This is really great! Seriously, I love your writing style. The observations your character makes..anyways, keep writing!
7FedorachildThis is really great! Seriously, I love your writing style. The observations your character makes..anyways, keep writing!
3/6/2010 c1 125MidnightSun95
This was great, very descriptive. A good second point of view story is pretty hard to pull off, but you did well. ;) As for the names for characters, I can't help you there. :) Anyways, great job and keep writing! I love the words you used in this story.
125MidnightSun95This was great, very descriptive. A good second point of view story is pretty hard to pull off, but you did well. ;) As for the names for characters, I can't help you there. :) Anyways, great job and keep writing! I love the words you used in this story.