for Universal Bride3/7/2010 c1 
34Lyra Pocaterra
Great poem, I like the writers dangerous relationship with the bride. As I read it I thought it talked of his bride, but by the end of the poem, I wasn't sure if it talked about a cigarrette or a bride. It could be either, both equally addictive to the person saying those words. Its been a while since I've read any of your stuff, Im glad to see you posting it on here again.
34Lyra PocaterraGreat poem, I like the writers dangerous relationship with the bride. As I read it I thought it talked of his bride, but by the end of the poem, I wasn't sure if it talked about a cigarrette or a bride. It could be either, both equally addictive to the person saying those words. Its been a while since I've read any of your stuff, Im glad to see you posting it on here again.
3/6/2010 c1 8sealednectar
A very well-written poem. Well done. A great surprise at the end.
Keep writing.
sealednectar
8sealednectarA very well-written poem. Well done. A great surprise at the end.
Keep writing.
sealednectar