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3/8/2010 c1 8Pandora's Flight
I see your back on fictionpress :] Good.

I really like this a lot. Probably one of my favorites out of the things you've written.

I like the separation, it adds a lot to the piece.

And obviously, I'm a fan of metaphors.

My favorite metaphor though:

"I was a nuclear winter / I was a dying sun."

Very vivid.

P.S. Thanks for the reference in your profile. It means a lot :]

P.P.S. I don't think you're done burning.

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