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4/13/2011 c1 3Kakashi Nuttcase
That was very startling. I love the way he thinks though. I wonder what it would be though for a man that has killed way to many to count. One that's obsessed with control and seeks it no matter from small animals such as cats or human beings roaming hte streets. Oh there I go again, sorry, but it was good and worth reading.
3/11/2010 c1 Fractured Illusion
Wow, didn't see that twist coming!

Lovely story. Sad too. You built up an interesting premise blending fact and fiction. Liked the sort of given-up attitude in the tone too.

One thing though: if she was known to have glasses, and her family (at least her mother) was more than willing to bring her anything - why didn't she bring her her glasses? Why didn't they comment on it?

Frac

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