for InBetweens3/9/2010 c1 Mr. Deadman
Wow.
I think I just processed more emotions than my mind should physically allow.
I normally don't read things like this, but I just couldn't stop. The constant flashbacks of memories interweaving with the principal storyline was very well done. The raw reality of events that the character had endured were handled brilliantly (so to speak). I don't know if there's anything more I can really say. Just...keep up the awesome work.
Wow.
I think I just processed more emotions than my mind should physically allow.
I normally don't read things like this, but I just couldn't stop. The constant flashbacks of memories interweaving with the principal storyline was very well done. The raw reality of events that the character had endured were handled brilliantly (so to speak). I don't know if there's anything more I can really say. Just...keep up the awesome work.