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3/25/2013 c1 WP
Lovely. Great descriptions!
11/16/2010 c1 IndiaLikeTheCountry
This is lovely. A really sweet story told in a very detailed and accurate way, I love the way you've written it and the pace.
3/31/2010 c1 HitchSlap
Aw, now I feel all nostalgic. Cool piece; great idea. Something as simple as learning to ride a bike can encapsulate all of a boy's hopes and dreams, and you did an excellent job of showing that. I like the fact that he doesn't care about his scraps and bruises, his rusting bike, or his dirty shoes. He's determined to do one thing alone-and that is to ride. My favorite lines were near the end, when he finally "gets it."

"And suddenly, I realize there was nothing to learn, no concept to grasp. All I had to do was look up. All I had to do was see."

That really feels like the secret behind it all.
3/9/2010 c1 Mitsi
Only one word: Wow.

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