for The Best Moment3/11/2010 c1 
2babykezyx
I like :) It's sweet. Good description and very butterflies-in-stomach moments. Aw :)
I know this is a short story but a short story can be as long as you like, there are no limitations.
I would have liked to have some background on the characters. Who are they? What happend to Krissy before that made her so afriad; who hurt her emotionally? How does she knoe Jared? Was he her best friend? Just some guy she met in college? What? I really do like the story but to really appreciate it, some background introduced throughout the story would be good :)
Other than that, me likey :) Kepp writing - you definatly are talented and I hope that you keep on improving and take pride in your work.
Hey, can you please come and read and review my stories? I would really appriecate it, thank you :) (One of them may be a bit confusing at the begiining but promise me, you will understand as the story progresses)
Anyways, thanx! :)
2babykezyxI like :) It's sweet. Good description and very butterflies-in-stomach moments. Aw :)
I know this is a short story but a short story can be as long as you like, there are no limitations.
I would have liked to have some background on the characters. Who are they? What happend to Krissy before that made her so afriad; who hurt her emotionally? How does she knoe Jared? Was he her best friend? Just some guy she met in college? What? I really do like the story but to really appreciate it, some background introduced throughout the story would be good :)
Other than that, me likey :) Kepp writing - you definatly are talented and I hope that you keep on improving and take pride in your work.
Hey, can you please come and read and review my stories? I would really appriecate it, thank you :) (One of them may be a bit confusing at the begiining but promise me, you will understand as the story progresses)
Anyways, thanx! :)