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3/18/2010 c1 28emilyrachel18
This is a very emotive peice of work and touched me personally to the core. The imagery is amazing, i particuarly like "and i'm always running backwards searching for myself in slow motion" i can relate to that. The last line is very thought provoking am i enough? Excellant, i look forward to reading more from you.
3/12/2010 c1 124in theory
It's pretty, though I feel commas would be very useful to regulate the flow, it reads a bit like a message from someone in a rush who doesn't pause for breath.

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