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3/12/2010 c1 1KRHolbrook
Hello.

You know, I'm beginning to think the only reason I don't often read poems is the fact that I can never find anything to point out that could be changed to make it into something better. Yours is probably the fourth poem I've read and it's one of the best. I don't see anything wrong with it at all.

The descriptive nature you've put into the writing almost feels like the reader could truly imagine the sensation of free-falling. I love those last two lines the most.

Thanks for sharing, and I'm adding this to my favorites. :)

- K.R.Holbrook

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