
5/10/2011 c1
3Unless-52
Wow...It's so interesting from the first chapter! I didn't see any mistakes,really. :)
Grace is waiting for him though...I know it. Well, technically, I don't but, you know what I mean...
~Miyako

Wow...It's so interesting from the first chapter! I didn't see any mistakes,really. :)
Grace is waiting for him though...I know it. Well, technically, I don't but, you know what I mean...
~Miyako
4/18/2010 c1
7Justagirlinabigbadworld
This sounds like it could be a fantastic story. You have done a great job of introducing the characters, I want to know what happens next - hope you will continue with this one as well as LAHOF :)

This sounds like it could be a fantastic story. You have done a great job of introducing the characters, I want to know what happens next - hope you will continue with this one as well as LAHOF :)
3/15/2010 c1
8sealednectar
This is very good:) Well done! Keep writing, I can't wait to see where this goes. There's loads of potential.
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sealednectar

This is very good:) Well done! Keep writing, I can't wait to see where this goes. There's loads of potential.
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sealednectar
3/15/2010 c1 Katie
An extremely interesting beginning! I definitely want to know what happens next. This story seems to be very intense and grapples with some tough issues. I like the way you've done this. Update soon!
An extremely interesting beginning! I definitely want to know what happens next. This story seems to be very intense and grapples with some tough issues. I like the way you've done this. Update soon!