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4/21/2011 c21 1thegurlwholovedyou
AMAZING :) loved it! i cant wait till the next chapter yay :) x
4/21/2011 c21 ghurl00
And to think that things are getting better between Madeline and Liam. Ugh, bets. It seems to be one of the major things that ruins relationships.
4/20/2011 c21 1Purpple.Elephant
Thanks for the awesome read.

I'm starting to like less-of-a-jerk Liam :)

Keep on writing
4/20/2011 c21 Kirakoda
Omg. I am going to kill Mark and Tim.

That being said, I absolutely love this story. And the point it's at right now has so much drama and suspense from where you left off. Carson, I trust that you'll do the right thing. Just do it soon! ~

Also I have to mention that I almost flipped everything over when Reece said he liked Kara. I was fuming. But I'm glad they straightened everything out~ I've been reading this story nonstop for like 3 days. I love your long chapters . I know for me, when I write fics, my sister usually reads it before I put it online, so she points out any stuff that spellcheck missed for me.. So if you want, I can beta your upcoming chapters... or something... Unless you want to find someone. Your story is really great, is all~

Update soon :D
4/19/2011 c21 mysticalemotion
Ngaw...Liam can be quite cute at times, he's a real softy inside hehe

And as for Carson, she needs to get her butt into action and kick Landon off his pedestal...I don't like him, he thinks he's cool and he's not! Just my opinion lol

Thanks for the update!
4/19/2011 c21 1Ceri Anne
No! Everything is going wrong! But at least Carson is going to fess up soon. She is, isn't she? Hopefully you'll update soon, although I'm torn between wanting you to finish so I can find out what happens, and wanting it to carry on forever!
4/18/2011 c21 24Kyo-to-Key
omg, update soon! I feel so bad for Landon... please just let her end this...
4/18/2011 c21 MeMe

I loved it of course.

I am glad to see that Liam is less of a jerk. I'm waiting for the next update :) I'm hoping for some more Reese Carson interaction.

Oh, I'm usually so into the story that I never notice any errors or mistakes. However, I did notice one mistake. You said waste instead of waist. You were probably just in the zone and weren't paying attention. I know I've said threw instead of through, just because I was so into what I was writing that I forgot how to write lol.
4/18/2011 c21 372898
Great Chapter! I can't wait to read more.
4/18/2011 c21 1checkyesdana
I really like Madeline and all by I get bad vibes from the fact she interviewed both of Carson's boys.

Great chapter, possessive Reece is so cute
4/17/2011 c21 Annie
I def. enjoyed it. Cant wait for more.
4/17/2011 c21 RDScholar
I really liked this chapter with Carson and Liam it was good to see the friendship-side of their relationship. Liam is an awesome character. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more!
4/17/2011 c21 ClaireponcherriI
Hahaha hi currently on my iPad so sort of hard to log on

Anyway, I loved this chapter! Liam was great :)
4/17/2011 c21 Klebs
This is turning out to be like a movie, a very painful, sad twisting movie .

You're killing me here, I shed a tear at the end :'(

I had completely forgotten about the bet, and I did not expect

it to come up AT ALL!

Poor Madeline, she gets her heart trampled on once then again, this time in public :(

I hate Time and Mark, they're the ones that are responsible for making Liam a jerk.

Hope things turn out better soon :(
4/17/2011 c21 CutieSOS
This was so good.

I want Liam and Madeline to be together so bad.

cant wait for more.

keep up the good work.
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