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4/17/2011 c21 1TheLastFireBender
OH MY FLIPPING GOD! RIGHT WHEN HE SAYS SORRY TUM ND MARK RUIN EVERYTHING...NO "SNIFF SNIFF" PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE FAST UR KILLING ME HERE LOL THX XOXO
4/17/2011 c21 2miaaa
You have no idea how excited I was when I logged onto my emails and saw you had updated.

I swear I nearly jumped five feet in the air - and it certainly didn't disappoint! I really loved this chapter, I loved how jealous Reece got and how he told Carson 'You're mine.'

That earned a massive 'aaw' from me :')

Also, I loved how we saw a more caring side of Liam, I hope we'll see more of that side of him!

Anyway, I loved the chapter, and please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon! ;D
4/17/2011 c21 2Miss Haps
I honestly do prefer Liam's plot line than Carson and Reese's... Is that bad?

Please update soon! You don't even know how much this chapter alert made my day!
4/17/2011 c21 cookie
YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!

The chapter was amazing as usual. :P

Although Liam, is harsh, I liked how he forced Carse to realize the situation she was in and show her the urgency for her to be honest with Landon. It was an interesting conversation they had.

And of course, Carse and Reece are just so cuute :)

I hope you update soon!
4/17/2011 c21 Pseudonym59
Oh, I love this story. :)

OK, so last chapter, my entire review got cut off. Hopefully, Fictionpress is done being a jerk. *crosses fingers*

Carson really needs to break up with Landon and tell the world about her and Reece. She's hurting him way too much. If she doesn't come clean soon, the whole situation is going to snowball out of control. Hopefully Kara and Landon take it well. :) The whole argument with Liam was kind of like the reality slap that Carson needed.

Liam's so cute when he's awkward and flustered. No wonder Maddie was blushing. I was really glad when the bet came up again. At first I thought it was just a way to push Liam to Maddie, but I like how it plays a bigger role. :) Tim and Mark are going to die early, I swear. :)

Great chapter!
4/17/2011 c21 Brown-Eyed Chocoholic
Finally, you've updated!

There are several small mistakes like missing punctuation marks and words that aren't supposed to be separated, but I can understand since you've been busy. :D The important thing is that you've put up another chapter.

What Reece and Carse are doing is wrong... but it would really suck for Landon. Landon's been sweet and all-I like Landon-but he really isn't the one. Sigh! I would hate to be him.

Shit, Liam. That was... ugh! YOU WERE CHANGING. Stupid guys. But Madeline had to know, anyway. But... still. And you were about to kiss and make up (well, maybe not kiss). I'm so excited to hear what's gonna happen between 'em. They better have a happy ending. :')
4/17/2011 c21 sappyromancelvr
Oh jeez. Poor Liam and Madeline. Nothing goes as planned. ;P

Carson really needs to get her butt into gear and tell Landon...really.
4/16/2011 c21 shoe-aholic
I liked the ending, Liam doesn't deserve to have it so easy! Though I feel so bad for Carson and Reece... and Landon and Kara :(

x
4/16/2011 c21 1matchutea
You sure havent lost your edge. (;

This chapter was absolutely amazing.

Reese never finds a way to not amaze me.

Finally!

By the end of the week, Reese and Carson are gonna tell Kara and Landon.

is it weird, that I find Landon kind of annoying now?

DANG. Tim and Mark are in for a world of hurt.

NO one should mess with a relationship that was just about to start!

Thaank you for updating Jenelle!

Please update again!

MUCH LOVE. xo
4/16/2011 c21 tianbaobao
aw, the suspense. i expect a break-up next chapter!
4/16/2011 c21 2bridgettblah
Same probelm with me D: Except, it actually works for you xP Haha.

Anyways:

Aw. I dunno, but I like this chapter. Sorta like a turning point for Liam xD But I kept hoping there'd be a breakup...That sounds bad. I LOVE Landom, but not for Carson...Haha, yea. I dunno. I cant wait for that though xD I just love drama. *Sigh* As long as its not my drama :]
4/16/2011 c21 NeverHeardOfYou
Ah! Liam and Madeline! So cute. :)
4/16/2011 c21 2HelgaBertoni
Loved it, update as soon as you can!
4/16/2011 c21 1Myst C
i don't like how carson hurts reece. but they are still cute as ever. she should just scream it to the world already! "I love reece" ;)

madeline and Liam are as cute as ever too. tim ruined it for them though...aw I liked how he punched the locker, it showed much more emotion :)

Awesome chapter! update soon!
4/16/2011 c21 2obijuankenobi
I don't think you know how excited I was when I saw the notification in my email inbox.

I'm sorry fp has been stupid lately. But, I'm actually kind of glad you've taken some time in updating; you've allowed me to read other stories in the time you've had away. So, thank you, in a way...

I like that this wasn't the last chapter. I look forward to Liam and Madeline (BTW, spectacular name choosing) working (or not working) things out.

Thanks for updating!
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