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12/10/2012 c20 cosmopolitan
can't believe it's been 10 months, where does the time fly? but jeez, i really enjoyed rereading this story, thank you!
11/30/2012 c23 4sanguine eyes
Just so you know, this is amazing. Pure amazing. I love Max-he reminds me soooo much of someone I know. I'm not kidding, the resemblance is freakish o.o Like, the name and the sexuality just weirds me out (oh yes, I know a gay Max). Anyways, please crank that last chapter out as soon as you get a chance :)
9/24/2012 c23 Leigh78
Great story...cant wait for the next chapter...
9/14/2012 c23 1Moo-moo-cowz
Hey, so uhm... are you ever planning on finishing this? I was just wondering... because I still really love this story and you ended the last chapter on a super dramatic part and I kinda feel like I was just left hanging...
8/31/2012 c23 4Jaden Ink
Can't wait for the final chapter.. just a couple things that bothered me with your story is I have a rule not to used the same word unless it's 3 sentences apart, or necessary. You do it quite a bit and every Time it happened my brain pulled me out of the story for a moment. Nothing that a thesaurus can't fix! Anyways love love love d Thai story!
8/19/2012 c23 5belloftheballinbluejeans
I'm not even joking here.
I was up ALL NIGHT (okay, maybe only till 1 or so) reading this
and then I read it on my phone at church.
All I can say is...
if you don't freaking update like...
I might hunt you down and kill you.
SO yeah.
Love the story, by the way.
8/18/2012 c23 shrimp27
Noooo, this story can't be ending soon! :( :( :( but anyways, please update soon? It's been over half a year! Pretty pretty please with a cherry on top? (:
8/11/2012 c23 zeeniya
I loved every single bit of this Story!
You knitted it Pherr-fecct-ly!
Pat urself on the back from me plzzz and I really wish I cud constructively contribute to you as a reviewer... But I guess I'll remain the admirer,always!
I seriously have fallen in Like for ur work, HARD!
after xoxluurve and star123, you have me hooked like crazy! :D
completed this roller coaster ride in just two days and I'm really anxious to see what do you have for us in the next 2 chapters.
Best of Luck for whatever you're pursuing in ur life!
God Bless!
7/28/2012 c23 elaine41779
Please finish this I really want to know how it ends
7/26/2012 c22 cosmopolitan
this is such a fantastic story, thanks for writing and sharing
i look forward to reading more from you!
7/25/2012 c23 Aspired Writer
Oh my god, Oh my f**king god! This story is flipping amazing and uh, you need to update asap! You are such a talented writer and please, please, please, PLEASE, update.
I love Reece and Carson's relationship. And well, not to mention Liam and Madeline. ;)
I need to know what is going to happen next. Like, now.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. (:

Aspired Writer.
7/24/2012 c1 2Annie not Annabel
Hi! I'm a judge for the Girl and Best Friend category on A Drop of Romeo. I'm pretty sure you know that this story was added to ADoR, but we are undergoing review rewrites right now, so I've gotten the chance to review your beautiful story!
This story is one of my favorites (if not my number one favorite), so it was awesome to be able to review it, though I may have gone a little crazy in my excitement! Here's the new review on ADoR for Dense is to You, as Male is to Boy:

I'm not quite sure how to review this gem of a story without going into obsessive fangirl mode, so if I start randomly typing in all caps in the middle of it, just try and bear with me.

This story is definitely my favorite story on FictionPress. Of course, all the other stories I review are amazing as well, but this one is very dear to my heart. It's one of the first stories I read on FP, it introduced me to ADoR, and it ignited my love for the Girl & Best Friend cliche. If that clouds my judgment of the story, then I apologize!

It's about a girl named Carson who has been best friends with golden boy Reece since they were five, due to their parents being best friends as well. At the beginning of the story, Carson pretty much comes out and says nothing romantic has ever happened between the two of them. Obviously that'll change when their parents announce that she will be moving in with Reece and his parents while they're working in Africa for the duration of the school year. This only gives her more time to pester him about the mystery girl he's been in love with for years. He finally agrees to tell this girl about his feelings, as long as the soccer team (of which he is captain) wins their championship game. While this is going on, Reece's other best friend Liam is taking his punishment for being a bad English student by being a part of the school newspaper. He butts head with Madeline, the editor of the paper, but eventually those feelings change.

I could go on forever about how good this story is, but that would make this a very long and not very good review. I really, really loved the characters. Carson was strong and kind and smart and not totally annoying or dependent on Reece, like in many other Girl & BFF stories. Reece is such a good character as well; he's very well-rounded and genuinely likable. He was very sweet, despite being one of the most popular guys in school. He made mistakes and made up for them. He was always there for Carson, even if it broke his heart. Even Liam had his redeeming qualities. Although he was sort of a jerk, he definitely had a soft side. I loved how made this story complex enough to be interesting yet simple enough for the reader to understand. All of the side characters and stories seemed very real as well. The dialogue never seemed pointless but was always realistic. The emotions the characters felt were conveyed remarkably really seemed to have a grasp on the whole "show, don't tell" rule of creative writing. Alas, this gorgeous story is incomplete; however, there are updates every few months, which never disappoint. Obviously, there are some faults in Dense is to You, as Male is to Boy, but I guess you'll have to read it yourself to find them!
7/18/2012 c20 RedWall
I'm clapping like a retarded seal right now.
7/17/2012 c1 LessThan34Ever
Dieing for an update. As in, if you don't update soon, I will die.
7/15/2012 c18 RedWall
There was the whole build up and everything and then the space, and I actually paused, thinking, this is it! He's finally telling her! ITS HAPPENING!
And then the idiot goes "It's Kara."
Never in my life have a hated a fictional character so much as in that moment. Not even Voldemort or President Snow.
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