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1/9/2011 c18 8Water Colours
*dies*

Kara.

= . =

... Somehow I should have seen this coming but this whole chapter put me in through so many emotions I was like "NO LANDDON SHUT UP!"

Then I was like "Go Carson for realizing!"

And then I kind of killed myself when Reece went and got stupid. XD
1/9/2011 c18 12All Over You
Dammit. Reece totally just broke my heart here. THIS IS WHY I HATE THE BEST FRIEND CLICHE. Haha, wonderful update :) This cliffhanger is going to kill me.
1/9/2011 c18 2Magin 2152
.

I knew that would happen...

and I think I know why, and what else is going to happen.

Still though...

WHY!
1/9/2011 c18 BlueRose41
Ah! No! Poor Carson finally got a clue nd he says FREAKIN KARA! i did not see that coming

I was so excited in this last chapter i thought he would say Carson but he didn't :(

I was actually yelling at Reece through the computer XD

but, i still loved this chapter

and I knew that madeline would fall for liam

I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter PLZ update soon:)
1/9/2011 c18 LeAnn
Well that's certainly not what I was expecting.. Ugh. All this build up and still no happy ending? Don't get me wrong, I'm glad it's not over yet but it's just frustrating. I hope things get resolved soon!
1/9/2011 c18 tennislove11
reese and carson better be together by next chapter! OHMYGOD the suspense is killing me!

update! I love this story!
1/9/2011 c18 8castiel89
I'm going to take a wild guess and say that if Carson hadn't said yes to Landon, Reece and her would be making out right about now.. He probably said Kara because he didn't want to admit it was her when she was already with someone else.

Life at Reece's is about to get so much more complicated and awkward, aint it?

One thing that was a little more noticeable than minor typos was when Carson was referring to her conversation with Madeline and you wrote Kara. Oops! Lol.

Oh Liam... He's in denial about his feelings for a certain journalist..

Happy New year to you too! And hope you get a chance to update soonish.

Ps: you broke my heart... I don't like you right now. Give me a few days :P
1/9/2011 c18 1checkyesdana
that was such an intense emotional roller coaster. I felt them all throughout this but you just had to end with heartbreak. =( I am so terribly sad. I hope you can post soon because I want to hug Reece so bad. How many chapters will I have to endure of Reece & Kara!

God, you're such an amazing writer. I can't even put it into word, definitely one of my favorite chapters
1/9/2011 c18 wish
i'll kill u if u don't change this thing and make him like carson. i mean seriously? common u cant do that... the whole story would be pointless
1/9/2011 c18 blithe.serendipity
LOL you have no idea how spazzy this chapter made me. XD No possible idea.
1/9/2011 c18 2HelgaBertoni
Loved it, update soon!
1/9/2011 c18 Klebs
I like that you purposely dodged a cliche but that also meant you had to leave it as a cliffhanger! I feel so bad for Carson, OMG! And poor Landon; all he is to Carse is a doormat, she's just using him and if Reece did tell her that he likes her then everything would have gone terribly wrong :/ Like Reece said, it was all bad timing :(

EVERYONE knows that he likes her.

Still though i really wanted a happy ending today, but now i have to wait until next month for you to write one!

Please make it sooner (A)

Oh and i really like how things are going between Liam and Madeline. Its nice to see Liam's more human, sensitive side =)

Haha if there's one thing I've learnt from this story its that you shouldn't lead guys on, especially if you're obviously in love with another. Being honest right from the start will make things a lot easier for everyone [but not a good romance story ofcourse]

Thanks for this chapter! I really appreciate it, and don't hate me for saying this but I like this story way better than Hooked on Him. (And i found quite a few mistakes which is understandable since you must have been really tired when you wrote this.

The worst one is : " He let go of me and stuck his into his soccer track pants, " somewhere at the start :P
1/9/2011 c18 admeliora123
NO. WHY? NED NEXT UPDATE NOW. T_T
1/9/2011 c18 CutieSOS
Awsome chapter.
1/9/2011 c18 1matchutea
HOW DARE YOU!

you ripped me to shreds when Reece confessed.

ARGH.

There both so dense.

Can't they just get together?

Landon... seems like a pest to me.

And Kara too.

They seem to be blocking Reece and Carson from being together.

Anyway this chapter is well written, no worries. ;D

Please Update soon! Pretty please? ;D
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