10/18/2010 c14 fullybooked
I understand that you haven;t been updating we're all busy, look at me( not literally!)I just red this update today cuz i got no school! So anyway, update when you can!

10/17/2010 c15 8castiel89
For some reason I think there was more to what went on on the soccer field. I just don't think Reece would fly off the handle like that unless Landon said something unlike his usual sweet self. And of course Reece wouldn't tell her because he doesn't want her to think he's trying to make Landon look bad and hurt Carson's feelings/self image by telling her exactly what went on... But I am probably totally wrong :)

But she was most def the source of their fight. And I think Kara might be seeing more than what Carson is about Reece and his feelings.

Carse should have totally laid one on him! He would've been too shocked to look into it and she could have escaped his tickle weapons of bladder controllessness!

Maddy probably knows what's really going on since she's always observant :).

More soon?

And congrats on LWTF win! Who! Go you!

10/16/2010 c15 1matchutea
Amazing as per usual! [;

Carson is really dense... I don't really like Landon as much anymore. He's actually getting on my nerves, Hahaa.

Kara seems nice still,

but Carson and Reece seem the best. [:

Liam and Madeline are just cute. ;D

Thanks for updating ! Really appreciate it! [:

10/16/2010 c15 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
liam is so cute

can you maybe put more about them please?

ah cars is in the middle D;

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON ;D

10/16/2010 c15 Pseudonym59
This chapter is probably one of my favorites. :) I like all the drama mixed with some subtle sweetness.

Carson's unbelievably dense, but you've got to admire her. She's in love with Reece, yet she's sacrificing her happiness to "help" him get his girl who she thinks is Kara. A+ for selflessness. F- for common sense. I just wish that Reece would man up and kiss her or that Carson will be visited by the Voice of Fate who clears everything up for her. God knows she needs that... Thinking about it now, Carson's got her work cut out for her once this whole "Mystery Girl" situation gets cleared up.

Her and Reece are utterly adorable. The whole living room scene made me smile. The fact that Reece has some serious B.O. makes me wonder if he's ever discovered the wonders of deodarant. It's great, really. You just put it on and BAM. You don't smell. He should try it some time. :P

NO! THEY WERE SO CLOSE TO KISSING! WHAT HAPPENED!

I'm really liking the Reece/Landon showdown thing. It's kind of weird how Reece decides to punch Landon now. Didn't he say that is saw anyone kissing his girl he'd punch them in the face? Is that what Landon said? Or did he just tell him off? Because if I were Landon, I wouldn't have taken Reece's crap. I adore Reece, but honestly, can he be a little less blatant with his jealousy? It's not fair for Landon.

I see that Liam and Maddie have moved from full-out war mode to normalish mode. It's cute how Liam is trying to flirt with Maddie and hwo he was waiting to make sure she got home safely. I wonder if she notices - or if she's like Carson. I'm praying for the former, otherwise, Maddie will fail miserably in the field of psycology... Man, when things between her and Liam heat up more, she's really going to have the upperhand.

I'm wondering about Tori and Arianna's reaction about what's happening. With their characters, it's hard to believe that they've been idle through all of this.

Great job on this chapter. :) You really know how to make a good build-up - something I need to get working on. :) And as for your author's note, what's a home-opener? We don't really have that in my school. *And technically, you won't SEE us at your next update. It's impossible. ;)*

10/16/2010 c15 flowingypsy
So much tension in this chapter, Reece needs to calm down before he loses Carson to Landon.

I think it's cute though, I want to see Carson and Landon's "relationship" venture out a bit.

10/15/2010 c15 Carla
Love your story its so cute. The chapters seem kind of repetitive though! Maybe you could add in some more action or get to the conclusion. Best of luck and I hope you update again soon :)

10/15/2010 c15 1checkyesdana
love the flirty contact between carson and reese this time. poor landon but go reece for defending himself. and liam was so cute at the end. i love this chapter