for Dense is to You, as Male is to Boy9/11/2011 c22 
1dream-a-while
Oh my, I love your story. I've been reading it incognito for awhile but I have finally gotten an account to review from.
I love how Liam's character grew as the story went on, and how you didn't rush the change from him being a jerk to him having actual feelings for Madeline.
1dream-a-whileOh my, I love your story. I've been reading it incognito for awhile but I have finally gotten an account to review from.
I love how Liam's character grew as the story went on, and how you didn't rush the change from him being a jerk to him having actual feelings for Madeline.
9/6/2011 c22 mallow.puff
Oh my God, no! I was just about to press the button for the next chapter when I realised there ISN'T a next chapter! Argh. Lol. Please, please for the love of your steadfast readers (me included, obvs, lol), update asap! :)
Oh my God, no! I was just about to press the button for the next chapter when I realised there ISN'T a next chapter! Argh. Lol. Please, please for the love of your steadfast readers (me included, obvs, lol), update asap! :)
9/6/2011 c18 mallow.puff
No, no, no, no, no! Everything was going so well. Why? Reece, the liar! Ha. Well... this chapter was a huge shocker.
No, no, no, no, no! Everything was going so well. Why? Reece, the liar! Ha. Well... this chapter was a huge shocker.
9/5/2011 c16 mallow.puff
Poor, poor Carson. She's in such a sticky situation now. I hope everything turns out for the better soon.
Poor, poor Carson. She's in such a sticky situation now. I hope everything turns out for the better soon.
9/5/2011 c14 mallow.puff
As much as I love the whole boy bestfriend overprotectiveness, the game at lunch made me cringe and say "oh, no" aloud. Still completely in love with this story!
As much as I love the whole boy bestfriend overprotectiveness, the game at lunch made me cringe and say "oh, no" aloud. Still completely in love with this story!
9/5/2011 c12 mallow.puff
Wow. Just.. wow. I literally cringed at the end when Carson crossed the "boundary". Whew. Pretty heated.
Wow. Just.. wow. I literally cringed at the end when Carson crossed the "boundary". Whew. Pretty heated.
9/5/2011 c11 mallow.puff
That was beautiful and .. ahh.. it was amazing! So heartfelt and Reece's little speech at the end. I thought this chapter was perfect.
That was beautiful and .. ahh.. it was amazing! So heartfelt and Reece's little speech at the end. I thought this chapter was perfect.
9/5/2011 c9 mallow.puff
Ha! Realisation at last. I admire the fact that you built it up and prolonged it; not like, BAM, in the second or third chapter. You've really got me feeling the butterflies, it's quite embarrassing how emotionally invested I am with the characters. Reading on...
Ha! Realisation at last. I admire the fact that you built it up and prolonged it; not like, BAM, in the second or third chapter. You've really got me feeling the butterflies, it's quite embarrassing how emotionally invested I am with the characters. Reading on...
9/5/2011 c5 mallow.puff
Oh, I feel so torn! The beginning and middle of this chapter made me feel stupidly giddy. Towards the end, I just felt so bad for all the characters (except Liam, haha). Anyway, this is my favorite chapter so far. My fave scene was definitely at the park bench.
Oh, I feel so torn! The beginning and middle of this chapter made me feel stupidly giddy. Towards the end, I just felt so bad for all the characters (except Liam, haha). Anyway, this is my favorite chapter so far. My fave scene was definitely at the park bench.
9/5/2011 c1 mallow.puff
Your writing is wondrous! I love your descriptive language and how easy your paragraphs flow. I was hooked on the first sentence and I'm super glad I clicked on this story. You are now officially one of my fave fictionpress authors.
Your writing is wondrous! I love your descriptive language and how easy your paragraphs flow. I was hooked on the first sentence and I'm super glad I clicked on this story. You are now officially one of my fave fictionpress authors.
9/5/2011 c22 1Amy Stardust
Wah! This story is so awesome! XD
I wanna see what Liam has planned, and I really hope that Carson doesn't do something really stupid. Please update soon. :D
-Amy Stardust
1Amy StardustWah! This story is so awesome! XD
I wanna see what Liam has planned, and I really hope that Carson doesn't do something really stupid. Please update soon. :D
-Amy Stardust
9/3/2011 c22 1moonliteroses394
Very cute (: I love absolutely love it. I cant wait to read the happily ever after !
1moonliteroses394Very cute (: I love absolutely love it. I cant wait to read the happily ever after !
9/1/2011 c22 Monserrat
OMG I LOVE THIS! i found myself feeling her emotions, i literally had butterflies in my stomack while reading this...And i cried when he lied and said Kare! you need to update so i can continue on with my life... Its Not good for me at school thinking about what could happen next and stuff... its like eating at me slowley. Anyways continue the awsome work and i hope hearing (this case reading) from you soon... p.s is it bad that im like in love with Reece.?.?.? Where do you come up with these characters... anyways im ranting on like a school girl so i will stop...okay .. Bye 3 :)
OMG I LOVE THIS! i found myself feeling her emotions, i literally had butterflies in my stomack while reading this...And i cried when he lied and said Kare! you need to update so i can continue on with my life... Its Not good for me at school thinking about what could happen next and stuff... its like eating at me slowley. Anyways continue the awsome work and i hope hearing (this case reading) from you soon... p.s is it bad that im like in love with Reece.?.?.? Where do you come up with these characters... anyways im ranting on like a school girl so i will stop...okay .. Bye 3 :)